CELPIP Task 1 Writing Sample for a Concern
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Topic
You’re experiencing problems with your heating and hot water. Write an email to your landlord. Draw his attention to the failure of his attempts to resolve the problem, express your concerns about the low temperatures, and suggest a solution.
Sample Answer
Dear Sir,
I am writing to draw your attention to a heating issue in my apartment. After mentioning the problem, in apartment 237, to your maintenance crew several times, and receiving nothing but empty promises, my feelings of frustration are rapidly rising.
Our heating issues began in the late fall when chilly evenings set in, and our attempts to turn up the heat proved futile. Feeling sure that this was a temporary problem, we simply pulled on sweaters, added extra blankets to our beds, and cozied-up in warmer pajamas. However, as the temperatures continued to drop, our concerns grew, and we asked a member of your maintenance crew to come and take a look at it.
The temperature outside is now -30˚C and inside +5˚C thanks to an abundance of space heaters that our neighbours have been generous enough to lend to us. Obviously, this situation is unacceptable, and so we ask that you give the matter your prompt attention. Temporarily moving to a vacant apartment in the building while the heating is being fixed would be a welcome alternative.
Regards,
Mike Smith
CELPIP Task 1 Writing Sample for a Request
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Topic
Your employer has asked you to organize a trip for a group of foreign students who are visiting from other countries. Write an email to a local museum asking about their exhibits, opening times and prices.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to ask for some help organizing a trip to your museum. Any information, tips and suggestions that might help make the day a success would be really great. I particularly need to know about times, rates and discounts.
Although I have been to your museum, I am a little concerned that it will not fill the whole day. With this in mind, it would be useful to know about any upcoming exhibits, their size, and when they will start and finish. Can you recommend any other attractions that might help to make the day a success? The nearer the better.
My group is made up of foreign students, all under 18. I am wondering if you offer any additional discounts for students. If so, how much is the discount and how many students would need to be in the group to quality for it?
I look forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Joe Piegan
CELPIP Task 1 Writing Sample for a Complaint
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Topic
The new cheque book you ordered from your bank hasn’t arrived. It’s three weeks late! Write an email to your bank manager. In your email, complain about the bad service, explain how you paid, and ask what he can do.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to complain about your bank’s service and to track down my new cheque book.
Three weeks ago I filled out the appropriate order form for a cheque book and paid with cash. I was assured that it would be delivered to my home within six business days.
It has now been three weeks since my order, and I have some urgent bills to pay. I have tried calling the bank several times, but no-one seems to be able to tell me anything about my cheques.
Please let me know how much longer I will have to wait and what can be done in the meantime to cover my bills. As a new customer, I am stunned at your bank’s inefficiency and am beginning to wonder whether another bank would make me feel more valued.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Joe Beckman
CELPIP Task 1 Writing Sample for a Report
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Topic
After witnessing an accident, the police have asked you to write a report describing what you saw, who was involved, the road conditions, and who you feel was responsible.
To Whom It May Concern,
I am writing to inform you of a ghastly motor accident that occurred just a moment ago as your prompt attention will be needed to salvage the lives of those involved.
I was heading to Lagos this morning through the Lagos-Ibadan expressway when I witnessed an accident. This unfortunate incident could have been averted if the vehicles involved had exercised both a little patience and a little restraint.
The collision happened due to a bad section of the road which is just after a sharp bend. Three vehicles were involved in the mishap, leaving five people badly injured. Thankfully, no life was lost but the vehicles are damaged.
Being an eyewitness to the accident, I think the black SUV should be held responsible because he appeared from nowhere, overtook the white car in front of him, and crashed into the oncoming yellow bus.
I hope this will guide your decision as you hasten to the scene.
Regards,
Akinwumi Dare.
CELPIP Task 1 Writing Sample for an Apology
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Topic
While working as a part-time Uber driver, you forgot to pick up a confirmed customer who had booked a ride to the airport. Write an email to the client. In your email, apologize for not picking him up, explain why you didn’t pick him up, and offer him a free ride.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing apologize for letting you down earlier today. I hope the alternative arrangements I made for you worked out and got you to the airport on time. Nevertheless, I feel that, as a long-term customer, you deserve a clear explanation from me outlining the events that conspired to create this unfortunate event.
Leaving plenty of time to get through the snowstorm, I set off to pick you up from the Greenland hotel. However, with all the heavy snow and blizzard conditions, my car got stuck in the snow. Despite rocking, digging, cursing, and pushing, my car refused to budge.
Realizing that I wouldn’t be able to make it in time, I called my friend who owns a four-wheel-drive truck. Although I knew it wouldn’t make for the fanciest ride to Pearson Airport, I also knew my friend would get you there on time. I would have felt absolutely terrible if you’d missed your flight.
I sincerely hope I didn’t add to your journey’s stress and that I will soon be able to offer you a complementary ride when you’re next in Toronto.
Best Regards,
Sam Jones
CELPIP Writing Task 2 – Paternity Leave Survey
Topic
For this CELPIP Writing Task 2 Sample, we’ll use a prompt about paternity leave. Are you wondering what paternity leave is? It’s the extra paid time that husbands get off work when their wives have a baby.
Your company is struggling with employee retention and is considering implementing either paternity leave or a shorter work day to increase the loyalty of its highly-skilled workforce. It has sent you a survey asking you to identify and explain your preference for:
Option A – paternity leave
Option B – shorter workdays
Sample Answer
RE: Paternity Leave Survey
Dear Mr. Johns,
I am writing this letter to you regarding our company’s paternity leave policy survey. Support for this policy, from both my co-workers and me, would be very strong since the transition to parenthood can be very stressful, and most of us feel that having a little more time would relieve much of the anguish.
The first two months for new parents are usually the hardest. Hospital visits and checkup appointments consume a great deal of time and emotional energy and often conflict with office hours. That conflict dramatically increases the anxiety level of working fathers and negatively impacts their performance both at home and at work.
The potential for the new policy to be disruptive in the short term is high, particularly for managers and team leaders; however, much of that disruption could be assuaged by allowing new fathers to work from home and delegating some of their duties during their leave.
In the long term, I believe the new policy would add some flexibility to the rules of employment that would result in increased employee loyalty.
Regards,
Steve Manners
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CELPIP Writing Task 2 – Transportation Survey
Topic
For this CELPIP Writing Task 2 Sample, we’ll use a prompt about transportation infrastructure. Are you wondering what transportation infrastructure is? It’s the roads, busses and trains that move you from one place to another.
Your city manager is trying to resolve some transportation infrastructure issues. He needs to decide whether to increase the number of bus stops and thereby reduce the distance between them or increase the number of buses and thereby their availability through the night. The city has sent you an opinion survey asking you to identify and explain your preference for:
Option A: less distance between bus stops
Option B: more busses during the night
Sample Answer
Dear Sir,
Thank you for including me in your survey to identify the community’s preference for either later busses or more frequent stops. My own preference would be for reducing the distance between stops as this would make both my commute and routine chores significantly easier.
As a loyal customer, I use the bus daily to commute to and from work. At the moment, my closest bus stop is a good thirty-minute walk from my house. Since the actual bus journey is only ten minutes, my total travel time in each direction is forty minutes, or an hour and a half every day. Putting a stop closer to my house would reduce that time by half and allow more time for family and work-life balance.
Furthermore, since I also use the bus for grocery shopping, a closer stop would reduce the distance I have to carry my six bags of groceries. As you can imagine, that load can be quite cumbersome; especially, during the winter when the sidewalks are covered in snow.
I look forward to hearing your final decision and hope that the bulk of the community feels, as I do, that creating more bus stops would be the better option.
Regards,
Tim Smith
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CELPIP Writing Task 2 – Censorship Survey
Topic
For this CELPIP Writing Task 2 Sample, we’ll use a prompt about censorship. Are you wondering what a submission is? It’s the item you provide to the art gallery so that they can display it.
Your local community is putting on an art show and is a little unsure about displaying some of the submissions. In an effort to resolve their internal dispute, they have decided to survey the community. They’ve asked you to identify and explain your preference for two options:
Option A: Censor the artwork
Option B: Do not censor the artwork
Sample Answer
Dear Sir,
Thank you for including me in your survey to identify the community’s preference for censoring the artwork in your upcoming exhibition or displaying it uncensored. My feeling is that, because the art show is intended to be a family event, the submissions should be censored.
Whenever children are involved in an activity, our responsibility, as adults, is to reduce their exposure to things they are not yet ready to understand. Children’s brains mature at different rates and exposing them to material before they are able to understand it can be very damaging. I once heard of a little autistic boy whose class was reading a story where the main character’s mother was killed on a train journey. The little boy was so deeply impacted that he neither spoke nor made eye contact with anyone for a week. Although that picture was drawn with words, the potential for harm is always there, and adults need to be on the lookout and ready to step in as necessary.
Overall, I think parents should be the ones to judge whether their children’s development is at a stage that can handle certain content; therefore, I suggest that you censor the submissions to your art show.
Regards,
Tim Smith
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Would you be able to please evaluate my writing?
I would be very grateful to you!
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You have recently moved to another province and need your internet service set up. You chose the company you would like to go with and made an appointment. However, nobody arrived at the scheduled time.
Write an email to the company in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:
Explain the problem.
Tell them why you need internet service.
Suggest what the company should do now.
To Bell’s Customer Support Team,
My name is Daria, and I’m writing this email to you regarding an incident that occurred today.
Recently, I have moved from Quebec to Ontario hence, I have a huge to-do list in order to settle myself happily in the new place. Luckily, or, in contrast, to my great disappointment, I chose your company as the preferred internet provider. Consequently, I arranged an appointment with one of your managers for a specific time today. As a result, after waiting for a few hours, I realized that no one would come today.
I want to draw your attention to the fact that I emphasized to the manager several times that I need to set up the internet as soon as possible due to my remote type of work.
A great disregard for the committed appointment today from your sire forced me to think about how eagerly you are open to new clients and how much you value them.
I don’t know whether it was a concatenation of circumstances or not, but I believe I’m entitled to a compensation replacement or any kind of compliment from your side.
If you are still interested in acquiring a new client, then I’m looking forward to seeing your quick response.
Your cooperation in this matter is greatly appreciated.
Daria
Your company is struggling with employee retention and is considering implementing either paternity leave or a shorter work day to increase the loyalty of its highly-skilled workforce. It has sent you a survey asking you to identify and explain your preference for:
Option A – paternity leave
Option B – shorter workdays
Thank you for including me in your survey to identify your employees’ benefits preferences. Personally, I feel that a shorter work day is a desirable option for me. There are many reasons behind this choice that I would have made, and I would highlight the most crucial to me.
The topic of the shorter work week/day has been a hotly debated topic amongst individuals. Whereas some argue that it is not efficient, I have read enough scientific research and materials to confirm the opposite. It’s truly said that a shorter work day helps to keep a healthy work-life balance for employees. Consequently, in this way, we would improve the working environment significantly which reflects the business’ productivity directly.
It is important to bear in mind the fact of the average age of our employees, and given that, paternity leave might not be appropriate and suitable for the majority.
On top of that, having shorter workdays on the list of your benefits would be a strong achievement and benefit in the face of new potential talents.
Nevertheless, I would support any of your decision.
I hope I’ve been able to answer your survey sufficiently.
Score 8 – Work on your sentence variety
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I would really appreciate your kind assistance .
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Q: You are taking an evening class at your local university, which is related to your job. On the last day of class, your professor announces that she is leaving the university because she was hired as a full-time professor at another university.
* Express how you feel about her leaving and her new position.
* Explain what you enjoyed about her class.
* Request to stay in contact and suggest a few ways to do so.
Dear Dr. Kamala,
I am your student, attending evening classes, on weekdays for java programming at Windsor. I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this to convey my regards for your new position at Stanford university.
Though, its hard to digest the fact that you are leaving Windsor, I am extremely happy for your new beginnings at the top-notch university. Undoubtedly, you are the best tutor, I have come across so far and you deserve this.
Attending your classes, is the best decision I have ever taken; they are exceptionally informative and engaging. There was a never a gloomy session delivered, I am astonished with your profound knowledge on computer programming languages. You have been great inspiration for me to excel in my career and constantly work on my technical skill-set.
Recently, I have sent an acceptance message in LinkedIn platform; request to acknowledge. I urge you to stay in touch with me on these online networking sites. We can also meet-up in tech-community events held in Stanford every month on first Sundays.
I wish you all the success for your future endeavours. Hope to see you soon.
Regards,
Sai
Score 8
Your manager is surveying employees’ opinions about commuting preferences. It is the company’s 10th year anniversary and your manager would like to offer a gift to all employees. She would like to know if the staff would prefer to receive a free underground parking pass for one year or a free public transit pass for one year.
Choose the option that you prefer. Why do you prefer your choice? Explain the reasons for your choice. Write about 150-200 words.
• Option A: I would prefer a free underground parking pass for one year.
Option B: I would prefer a free public transit pass for one year.
Dear Mr Smith,
It is very kind of you to offer such a gift to all employees. Of course, a choice is to be made by everyone individually as it depends on the type of transportation each of us uses. Personally I prefer a parking pass for the following reasons.
Firstly, it would save me a lot of money as parking in Toronto, as we all know, is extremely expensive. Monthly pass for public underground parking costs approximately two to three hundred dollars! So this option would give me an opportunity to use my budget more effectively.
Secondly, it would safe me a lot of time. Since it’s so expensive to park a car near our office, I have been using a public transportation to commute to work. As I live in Hamilton, it takes me around two hours one way, wether it’s only one hour by car.
Considering the reasons above a free one year parking pass would be an amazing and life changing gift for me. However, if I were you, I would take everyone’s situation to account as this is very specific matter, and there is no common solution for everyone.
Best Regards,
Anastasiia Kalush.
Score 8
You have recently moved to another province and need your internet service set up. You chose the company you would like to go with and made an appointment. However, nobody arrived at the scheduled time.
Write an email to the company in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:
• Explain the problem.
• Tell them why you need internet service.
Suggest what the company should do now.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m writing regarding my internet installation, which was supposed to happen this morning, however no workers showed up on the agreed time, and no one from your company has contacted me.
I made an appointment on your website for Monday, August 26, 10:30 am at 24, Castlefield Dr, Hamilton, ON. After I waited for more than one hour I had to leave the house to pick up my daughter from her classes. Unfortunately, I did not receive any calls or messages from installers during that hour or afterwards.
As I work remotely for the international company, I must have 24/7 internet connection to be able to do my job. This situation made me to postpone a very important meeting and my boss did not feel happy about it.
The internet has to be set up tonight or tomorrow morning, the latest. Please contact me as soon as possible, so we can rearrange the time for installation. As the only way to contact your customer support is by email, I expect a quick response from your side. I hope you can understand how important this is to me and my job.
Best Regards,
Anastasiia Kalush.
Score 10
You work in a very big office. There is a popular and cheap restaurant in the building. The boss is thinking of removing the restaurant and replacing it with a childcare facility for the working parents in the office. You have been asked to respond to an opinion survey.
Option A: I think we should keep the restaurant.
Option B: I think we should replace the restaurant with a childcare facility.
Thank you for including me to be a part of this crucial survey. I would like to weigh in on this matter and present my argument in the favour of keeping Shelly’s Kitchen, a restaurant that’s popular amongst the staff and many locals.
I strongly believe that Shelly’s Kitchen should not be removed as it’s a source of lunch and evening snacks to many employees working in our esteemed organization. The daily lunch meals provided by the restaurant are not only cheap compared to other vendors but also delicious. I often enjoy the variety offered in their menu and a similar sentiment has been echoed by my peers as well.
Furthermore, consuming food in the restaurant is time saving as most of us don’t have adequate meal preparation time in the morning. To add to this, a majority of our company’s employees are single and a childcare facility would be of no use to us for the time being. I understand the sentiment of working parents and empathize with them, but they too enjoy the sumptuous dishes offered by the restaurant.
In conclusion, the existing restaurant is more beneficial for our employees due to the reasons mentioned above.
Score 8. For a 9+, make sure you identify your main ideas in the introduction and reiterate them in the conclusion.
You recently made reservations for dinner at a very famous and expensive restaurant in town. However, the meal and the service were terrible. The restaurant manager was not available to solve the problem, so you left without a resolution.
State what problems you had with the food you ordered. Complain about the service. Describe how you want the restaurant to resolve the problem to your satisfaction.
Dear Manager,
I am writing this email to express my disappointment about the recent experience I had in your restaurant situated in Downtown, Toronto. I had made a reservation for two on 22nd October at 8 PM on the occasion of my wedding anniversary.
After a recommendation from a friend, me and my wife were really looking forward to trying your signature ‘Pasta’, however we ended up leaving with a bitter taste in our mouths. Firstly, the pasta we received was uncooked and shabbily presented. I was shocked to see that a dish worth $100 was given to us on an unclean plate and did not match the description on your menu.
Moreover, upon complaining about this to the server, we were not met with a positive response. Our server, Mike, was rude for no reason and did not let us voice our concerns. When I asked him to call the manager, he just abruptly walked away saying, “The manager is not available”.
I request you to look into this matter and either provide us with a complimentary meal or kindly refund the sum of $135 in my original mode of payment.
Yours sincerely,
Sid
Score 8
Read the following information.
You live in a small town of 10,000 people. A large green area in the centre of town is undeveloped. The city has sent out an opinion survey to see what residents would like to have built-in that area
City Development Survey:
Option A: Shopping Complex: This shopping mall would include restaurants, a large supermarket, and a movie theatre.
Option B: Recreational Park: This park would include a sports complex, a large green area, and a small petting zoo.
I strongly favor the decision to establish a place in the heart of the town rather than leaving it entirely as a forested area. In my view, Option B is preferable to the shopping complex.
The shopping complex offers significant advantages in terms of convenience and flexibility. It provides access to essential amenities and food, while also expanding entertainment choices with its cinema and restaurant.
My primary rationale for selecting Option B is the inclusion of a sports complex. Presently, students and young people must travel out of town for sporting activities due to the absence of nearby sports facilities. This lack of recreational opportunities has a negative impact on their lives.
Additionally, both older individuals and young people enjoy going for walks, spending quality time in a natural setting, and gathering with family and friends. Wouldn’t a park provide these delights to them?
Lastly, the addition of a zoo to the park would be immensely beneficial, especially for children. It would enable them to learn more about animals through direct interaction and observation.
In conclusion, I believe that establishing a recreation park would be an appealing enhancement for the town, taking into account the reasons mentioned above.
Score 10
You were charged for items which you have not purchased at the local grocery shop.
Write a letter to the manager of the grocery shop in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:
Describe the problem that you have faced,
Explain the items you have purchased,
Suggest what the manager should do to resolve it.
Dear Manager,
Hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to express my extreme disappointment while visiting your store yesterday.
Myself Dhruvil Patel, I have visited your store on 23rd October 2023 and I appreciate the variety choices you have in store for all types of grocery, I would say it’s one stop shop, however, I dissatisfied on the last point of purchase. After returning home, I have found out that I was charged for a bag of rice which I have not purchased.
According to purchase, I have bought 1 kg tomatoes, 2 bags of chips and 1 pk of ketchup. But I have charged for 5 items including a bag of rice. Because of that, I have to go back to store again and explain the situation which took almost 2 hours to complete refund process. Additionally, I had to wait in lineup which is another big reason of dissatisfaction.
I request you to get regulated scanner with counter in POS to resolve the issue as, manual entry will continues making error in billing which will spoil the precious time of all customers as well as for staffs.
I would love to visit the store again for my regular purchases and hope the issue will be resolved by that time.
Regards,
Dhruv Ptl
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Score 7
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You and your neighbors have been receiving a lot of junk mail. You spoke to the mailman about this problem, but were told to contact the regional post office.
Write an email to the manager of the regional post office in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:
1.State the problem you have with the unwanted junk mail
2.Complain about the problem.
3.Describe how you want this issue to be solved.
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Dear Manager,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing this email to express the concern that lately, I and my neighbors are having plenty of unnecessary mails.
My name is Dhruvil Patel, I have been living in the region of peel from last 5 years. We are facing a problem with the junk mails which contains inordinate amount of advertising materials, promotional catalogue, brochures, etc. Receiving a variety of mails is not the inherently negative; nevertheless, sometimes it can get very exhausting, particularly when you are (expecting an important) Letter to be mailed. I have tried to justify the issue to the postman of this area but he guided us to contact the regional post office.
We would like to inform you about an issue that has arisen due to an influx of the junk mails. I had been expecting a package from my workplace containing some important items however, it was unable to be delivered to my mailbox as it was out of space. Therefore, I kindly request to you that please take the necessary steps to address these issues and cease the delivery of such unwanted mails.
Hope you will look forward to resolve the issue as soon as possible.
Regards,
Dhruvil Patel
Score 7
Dear manager,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing dissatisfactory email for the service being promised to me while renting the car from your company.
Myself Dhruvil Patel, I have rented BMW X3 from your company a month before for 3 months as I was planning to go on tour. BMW X3 is the best car I have found for the comfortable driving for long trip. Even I became fan of the performance it has given while using for first two weeks. All of a sudden, air-conditioning stop working in middle of my trip. Ever since the car has no air-conditioning, however, the cooling fan is working fine. As per the service offered to me while renting car, they have said mechanic will come to the place if car finds any mechanical issues, because of that reason I am trying to call your company to resolve this issue and get it fixed. But nobody is giving proper response.
I would like to request you to send a technician to fix the air-conditioning as it’s hot weather out here. I have already submitted repair application with the detail of the place to your website so it will be easier to locate us and send help.
I am forward for your good response and compensation for the issues I had to face.
Regards,
Dhruvil Patel
Score 7
Evaluate Task 1 Please:
Dear Jack,
I am writing to express my disappointment and frustration with the recent experience that I had in your apartment and to bring to your attention the several issues that I encountered with the new neighbors.
To begin with, I have been living in your apartment for the past two years and never faced any kind of issue. But recently since the new neighbors came, it is almost impossible for me to live here. They always play loud music and do dance rehearsal sessions till late nights, which causes sleepless nights for me.
In addition, I have tried a couple of things to avoid the loud noise coming to my house. I closed all the doors very tightly and put the curtains over the windows, but that did not even help me. Given that, I have already requested them to lower the volume of music, but they are ignoring me all the time.
Considering the above, I am pleading with you to start warning them for the sake of my mental and physical health. In case that will not help, I will advise you to take some legal action against them.
I am looking forward to your positive response.
Yours Faithfully,
Jose
Score 8
After witnessing an accident, the police have asked you to write a report describing
what you saw,
who was involved,
the road conditions, and who you feel was responsible.
Dear Officer,
I’m writing this email to provide the details about the incident that was happened at the intersection of Steels Ave. and McDavid road, since I have witnessed it.
I was driving back from my work and when I approached near the location where the accident occurred, I saw a white pickup truck slamming into the black SUV. The SUV was taking left turn while that truck was going straight.
There were 4 passengers in both of the vehicles, 3 in SUV and 1 in truck. Truck’s driver escaped with minor bruises; however, a person sitting on the other car’s front passenger seat had some severe injuries.
As far as I have noticed, it was the bright sunny day and the road was dry enough for vehicles to make good traction. Therefore, I believe that the driver of the white truck seems to be at fault because he was driving fast and failed to stop when the lights turned red, resulting in collision.
I hope the information I have provided would be helpful to solve the case. If you need to know anything else, I will be very pleased to assist.
Regards,
Satvir
Score 7
Your local community is putting on an art show and is a little unsure about displaying some of the submissions. In an effort to resolve their internal dispute, they have decided to survey the community. They’ve asked you to identify and explain your preference for two options:
Option A: Censor the artwork
Option B: Do not censor the artwork
I believe that the artwork should not be censored because it could demotivate the artists and the exhibition would be unsuccessful due to less spectators.
The art show mainly has the purpose of bringing awareness about human rights. In order to present it efficiently, artists have devoted their precious time in researching about it and putting their work into practice. Therefore, banning their submitted art would be unfair because they may feel that their talent does not values enough, resulting in being demoralized. In addition, they would avoid addressing such issues, further into their profession.
Moreover, community’s show of arts is getting popular among individuals due to its primary topic of human rights. Thus, eliminating piece of arts related to that could result in audience’s lack of interest in it. Consequently, this art show could flop and society’s management would be in financial loss. Additionally, some viewer may feel dismayed upon missing art of their interest at the show, since some of those art-pieces were added in the promotional advertisements.
Conclusively, to keep artists motivated for raising such issues and making the event successful I would prefer not to censor the controversial art.
Score 7
Please evaluate the Writing Task 1:
Dear Jack,
I am writing to let you know I am planning to go to vacation this summer, and to invite you for the vacation.
First of all, It is been ages now, when we all friends have had spent the time together. So now I am planning to go to some hill station this time. How about Manali? Jane and Jose are also very excited for the Manali. Let me know what do you think.
Secondly, We are planning to spend one day at Kullu and other two days in Manali. At this time, Manali will have the pleasant weather so it is the best time to enjoy all the activities available there. I am very eager to enjoy the activities like Trekking, Rafting and so on.
Lastly, I would like you to join us for this vacation. I assure you that this will the best memories that we are going to have on this vacation. Let me know your thoughts, so that I can book the tickets at the earliest to avoid the last minute rush.
I am eagerly waiting for your response.
With warm wishes,
Garry
Score 7
Task 1
Dear Manager,
I am James, and my recent visit to your renowned restaurant, El Classico Cuisine, with my wife left me compelled to share our experience. After meticulously planning for months, we secured a reservation for our tenth wedding anniversary.
Despite our punctuality, we were disheartened to wait nearly 30 minutes for our reserved table. It appeared there had been a double booking, an understandable mishap. Our patience waned as we eagerly awaited the arrival of our server, a wait that extended for an additional 20 minutes. However, our dismay reached its peak when the food brought to our table did not align with our order. My wife, anticipating beef bourguignon, was served pork tenderloin instead. Regrettably, the server’s response lacked an apology, leaving us feeling disrespected.
To address these issues constructively, I offer two suggestions. Firstly, consider conducting etiquette and hospitality training for your service staff, perhaps in the form of a refresher course. Secondly, I recommend augmenting your staffing levels to prevent overburdening your team. Inadequate staffing can lead to service lapses, leaving detrimental effect in reputation.
Feel free to contact me should you wish to further discuss our experience.
Sincerely,
James Bond
Score 9
Task 2
You work in a small office. The boss wants to reduce vacation time by two days but send everyone in the office to a nice beachside hotel for 4 days of job training. Some of the staff are very happy with this idea. Others are upset. The boss asked you to respond to an opinion survey.
Choose the option that you prefer. Why do you prefer your choice? Explain the reasons for your choice. Write about
150-200 words.
* Option A: I think we should keep our vacation time instead of going to the training.
* Option B: I think we should do the training and cut back our vacation time.
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thank you for including me in the opinion survey regarding your proposal to join the job training at the expense of vacation time. Even though I have to shrink my holiday plans, I still think it is a great opportunity that we cannot miss.
Firstly, let me express my gratitude for your choice of location for this occasion. The beach house itself sets the holiday mood and can relieve the tension for those who might feel a bit stressed with vacation time cut back. I think not only will we enjoy the training, but we will request one more upon completion of this one.
Secondly, the crash course on the new customer management system is long-awaited and is desperately needed for our small team. As our day-to-day operations are based on accurate and quick data about our clients, I strongly believe that this 4-day learning session will boost our team’s ability and bring results in the coming quarter.
Finally, I would like to suggest to round up our training with a small teambuilding event. I have some ideas on how to organize it and have a small selection of team-building activities that we will all enjoy.
I am looking forward to this chance to improve my skills and will do my best to support you with this initiative.
Best regards,
Stacy.
Score 8 – remember to use the second conditional for suggestions!
Task 1.
You are making a plan for a summer vacation. You are interested in several tour options you found online while browsing.
* Your email should do the following things:
* Tell the travel agency where you want to go
* Describe what you are interested in
* Ask about the cost and payment options
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you regarding my recent booking under the name Stacy (booking number 89590JIMD). Me and my family are visiting Krabi, Thailand for the first time, and I want to ensure we make the most out of our stay.
I do not have much time to plan our trip, hence here I am asking for your helping hand. As we have two small children, 2 and 5 years old, the last thing we want to do is hike or do anything extreme. We are looking for something that would be exciting for adults and kids alike, such as island hopping tours, bus tours or kayaking if that is on the map for Krabi. My husband is dying to see James Bond Island, so if it’s not included in the island hopping package, we can arrange a separate trip just for that highlight.
Once you have an idea of how our time can be arranged, could you please send it my way (123@mail.com) coupled with the prices for each of the activities? Since you mentioned over the phone last week that we can pay for the hotel upon arrival, could we do the same for the activities? I hope this is not too much trouble for you, and I am looking forward to hearing back.
Best regards,
Serhii
Score 10
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this email inquiring about some information that would help us to plan our trip efficiently.
Our company will be organizing a tour for a group which includes students from different regions of the world, and we are considering to take them to the Luxe museum.
Therefore, I would like to know that what exhibits are being presented at the museum. If you could provide me the details about them, whether the Luxe displays the traditional exhibits or the modern ones. Since we would be organizing two separate groups than we could divide our students into different pairs as per their preference.
In addition, please also provide the timings of the openings and the closings for the upcoming week. One another thing, if there is any statutory holiday coming within the next week when the museum will be closed, please do not forget to mention that. Moreover, please let me know about the ticket prices for a group. If some discounted tickets were given to the groups, it would be great.
I look forward to hearing back from you soon.
Regards,
Rajveer
Score 9
(Paternity Leave Survey)
If the company wants the best-skillful workers to continue working with it them, It would be a great venture, if paternity leave to be implemented. It will not only benefit to the staff, but also to the company.
Paternity leave is required when an employee’s wife reaches at the moment when she needs someone for mental support, so her husband can be there all the time. For instance, after delivery some women face the post delivery cognitive stress as her life alternates with a new family member’s addition, at that time, it is her husband who solely can assist her in the new environment’s adaptation.
The paternity leave would be also suitable for the corporation because, once a worker’s responsibilities are increased, it would reduce their capability to deliver the best performance. Therefore, productivity of firm would decline, and the company have to be through losses. In order to get best out of such situation, allowing the workers to have the paternity leave would help them to return to their work with confidence and without worry, so that they can perform better.
Due to the aforementioned reasons, facilitating employees enough time for family setup and for maintaining company’s service quality, paternity leave would be a felicitous effort.
Score 8
Thank you so much for including me in this survey regarding school uniforms. In my opinion school uniforms are less important during study. It is useless for students, parents, and schools.
Firstly, Students are required to be in a comfortable zone learning at school. They take the challenge of wearing school dress as an extra activity for them. Moreover, students are already stressed from books and assignments; attendance, timing, and lectures. Also, it’s big hectic for school-going parents.
Secondly, as per school rules, students have to wear a uniform before going to school to show equality and punctuality. They spend a lot of time preparing their school dress. Most of the students were absent from school and lost their studies due to dirty school dress. Additionally, learning requires only concentration and study material; teacher support; and group study. As far as my concern. There is no connection between dress and education.
To sum up, schools should remove uniform barriers and highly focus on student studies for learning. It will be helpful to growing our nation.
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Score 7
You live in a CELPIP TIP downtown there are some schools. Some of schools, using the internet in schools is getting more popular. Is this a positive or negative development?
* Choose the option that you prefer in about Write about 150-200 words.
– Option A: Positive Development
– Option B: Negative Development
task 2
It is a technological era, the Internet is beneficial for everyone especially for school kids because it’s helpful to teachers and students for learning and teaching. Moreover, it is supportive to enhance the student knowledge of students all over the world. On the other hand, it has some negative impact on teenagers.
Firstly, a number of students usually use social media and they are showing interest in visual studies. In addition, Teachers prefer useful study material from the Internet. Also, share the links for learning at home in their free time such as during traveling, etc.
Secondly, School management is facing a big challenge in technology awareness. Teenagers must have an idea about internet usage or survive easily because everything is going on online, for instance, shopping, Education, and e-booking; e-banking. Students must acquire all things.
To sum up, Nowadays everyone wants to meet the global challenges. Therefore, school students need to enhance their knowledge more to achieve their gaols. Schools should allow to internet for studies in the school or classroom.
173 words
Score 7
City Development Survey
You live in a small town of 10,000 people. A large green area in the centre of town is undeveloped. The city has sent out an opinion survey to see what residents would like to have built in that area.
Option A: Shopping Complex: This shopping mall would include restaurants, a large supermarket, and a movie theatre.
Option B: Recreational Park: This park would include a sports complex, a large green area, and a small petting zoo.
A:Task 2
Dear Sir,
Thank you for including me in the survey regarding the development of the Central Park undeveloped area. I think both options are great, but I would incline a bit more in the direction of the shopping complex.
As I have just moved here with my family from the big city, we still miss some of those traits that the big city has to offer. Our small town has only one big supermarket, which you still have to drive to for quite a bit, and there are just a handful of options for dining out. In the short term, we can live with that, but as we are planning to settle down here, it would be great to have a bit more variety within your reach. Plus, I am a big movie fan, so I cannot say “no” to the cinema.
The second and more important point is what opportunity the shopping complex brings. Having a platform for growing a business is crucial for small towns like ours. It can attract more people to join our community and provide them with a chance to build their lives here without looking outwards. In this respect, the shopping complex is not merely a matter of entertainment but an essential step for the whole town.
Overall, I think the shopping complex will drive progress for our small community and bring joy as well as opportunity for those who are seeking it.
Best regards,
Ethan
Score 8
Task 1
You recently made reservations for dinner at a very famous and expensive restaurant in town. However, the meal and the service were terrible. The restaurant manager was not available to solve the problem, so you left without a resolution.
• State what problems you had with the food you ordered.
• Complain about the service.
• Describe how you want the restaurant to resolve the problem to your satisfaction
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to complain about the recent visit to the restaurant that you manage. There were problems with my reservation, the food quality, as well as the service that one of the waiters did not care to provide.
Two days ago, I was celebrating my wedding anniversary with my wife. For this occasion, I chose her favourite restaurant, which happened to be yours. But from the very start, things went wrong without any warning.
Our reservation happened to be under the name Nathan, which was evidently registered wrong, as my name is Ethan. However, no matter how much I was trying to convince the hostess that it was, in fact, my reservation, she failed to take my word for the truth.
When almost an hour later, we made our order, the waiter decided to give out the surprise I was planning and asked my wife whether the cake, which she had no idea about, should be served before or after the drinks.
Finally, the steak that I was kindly presented was half raw, even though I explicitly asked to make sure it was well done. As a result, I was left to the mercy of hunger; the surprise for my wife was no longer one, and all we had to do was enjoy the wine, which, I must admit, was one of the finest I have ever tried.
I do not hope to receive compensation for any of the ruined plans for the night or wine, but the cost of the meal that we had would be great to be reimbursed for.
Best,
Ethan.
Score 8
Question: you have been having problems with your computer. you took the computer to be repaired, but after being repaired, the computer doesn’t work well.
Ask what happend at the shop
Explain why you are not satisfied with your sevice
describe what you want the manager to do
Dear Shop Manager,
I am writing this letter to bring to your attention that my computer is not repaired properly from your shopkeeper.
I am a regular customer come to your shop. On last week, I brought my computer to your shop to fix volume control and along with graphics image is not visible.
Given this fact, I would like to describe about the incident happened on your shop last evening. Yesterday morning, I received a call from your shop saying that you can take back your computer as it is fixed. I came to your shop to takeback my computer and paid the bill sum of amount $150 for the services. Once I return to home, I was shocked due to volume control issue persist.
Moreover, Graphics image is getting displayed but it’s seeming to be scattered. I need to complete my project presentation by next week.
I would request you to take back my computer from my home and please resolve both issue again and deliver to me within 3 business days.
I hope you will consider my request and translating to prompt actions from your side. Your kind cooperation in this matter will be greatly appreciated.
Regards,
Sree
Score 6
Dear Hotel Managers,
I am writing to ask for information regarding the room availability of two people for the upcoming month’s vacation. I particularly need to know about timing, rate; discount; exact location; food. All details would be a great full for me for making a final decision.
Although I have visited your hotel. I have a little concerned that I will not spend the whole month. Please tell me about room availability, room size, charges; payment procedure. Can you recommend any other attractions that might help to make the vacation successful?
I am wondering to know if you offer any further discount for new customer. How much discount would you offer please mention separately? In addition, I and my friend belong to a Muslim family we would prefer smoking-free rooms and halal food.
Kindly send me all detail before Friday so that I can choose the best option to book. feel free to contact at 123-4555-555 or email me at abc123@gmail.com.
Awaiting your prompt reply.
Regards,
Jeo.
Score 6
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You have registered for a six-month computer training program at Sambro Community College. Therefore, you want to rent a room from the Sambro Housing Agency. Write an email telling them when you need the room, the type of room you would prefer, and the reason for your request.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to ask you regarding a tenant room at your college through an agency. Therefore, I will be studying in a computer training program that’s why I required a living space during study.
Although my home is far away from college. Moreover, I belong to a middle-class family my father is unable to afford my traveling expense on a regular basis. With this in mind, I would prefer a shared room. Can you recommend any other suggestions that might help me? The nearer the better.
I am wondering if you offer any additional discounts for being a student. Please let me know the accommodation amount and room size.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Jet.
170 words
Score 6
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Thank you to the government for devising means to continuously develop our small town, Whitby. Although some residents may argue that shopping complex would be beneficial, from my view point constructing a recreational zone would be better for the community. It will instil healthy habit and create a social circle.
Firstly, considering the major population consist of younger generation, it is imperative to introduce them with healthy atmosphere from the early age. To begin with, they can utilise the sports complex which conduct classes such as boxing, indoor staking and aerobics for building stamina and muscle. Additionally, the family can bask in the sun , go out for picnic in the large open green park considering the summer time is short lived here in Canada. Moreover, with the industrial development happening around the town, the green landscape will have incremental impact on our well being by reducing the pollution.
Furthermore, a petting zoo would be used to organise events about the different habitant style of animals. Thereby, creating a social community where mind like individuals can share ideas, information and plan trips together in future.
To conclude, the recreational park will be a better choice when compared to shopping complex. I eagerly await the final decision of the city development.
To Whom it may concern,
My name is Priyanka. I visited the prestigious restaurant – Bellona, located at Yonge street based on the google reviews. But via this correspondence i would like to express my profound disappointment about the quality of the food served.
My friend and I ordered spinach lasagna and a pizza. The spinach in the dish had pungent smell and tasted terrible. In addition to this, the pizza had milk based cheese where we specifically mentioned about the dietary requirement i.e, vegan. Moreover, when we approached the server about the dreadful experience, he denied to be his fault and made an unpleasant remark. The behaviour of the staff caught me off guard. To add to the overall dismay, absence of the managerial presence made us feel unheard and neglected.
Considering the goodwill of the restaurant, I request you to take appropriate action against the server for his inability to provide excellent customer service. Additionally, ensure well-trained staff or senior management is available to take genuine feedback from the customers.
Looking forward for a positive response from your end in this matter.
Regards,
Priyanka
Task 2 -Score 8 – You’re making a suggestion, so use the second conditional throughout.
Task 1 – Score 7
Task 1
Dear Manager,
I am writing this correspondence to express my profound disappointment regarding the persistent parking issue faced by us at the Square One shopping complex located in Mississauga.
My family and I are frequent visitor at your mall. The grandeur of the complex is throughly enjoyed by everyone in my family. Specifically, the entertainment zone is a go to place for my daughter. But unfortunately, recent unavailability of ample parking space has added to our dismay. Additionally, even if there are few spots available, the security at the gate denies entry. This unsatisfactory behavior of the staff has caught me off guard.
Currently, we have to park our car at a paid parking ground which is located a mile away from the mall entrance. In addition to this, walking all through from the parking to the mall carrying a toddler in my arm makes it distressing.
Given the mall’s esteemed reputation, I would like you to take immediate action to provide additional parking space, specially for frequent visitors like us. I am looking forward for a positive response from your end on this issue.
Sincerely ,
Sweta
Task 2
Employee welfare is the biggest treasure for a company. I express my gratitude for including me in the survey regarding the childcare facility in the office. Although some employees may argue to continue with the restaurant, I firmly believe replacing it with childcare would have significant benefits to the working parents. It will instil trust, confidence and longevity of their tenure at the workplace.
In my viewpoint, this will have a valuable impact on the company’s reputation. Establishing a facility will be an accepted change for mothers who struggle between their personal and professional commitments. Nevertheless, it will be cumbersome to find another pocket friendly food joint nearby, this cannot be weighed with the incremental advantages the company will gain by providing childcare support.
Generally, the parents juggle between finding a good daycare at close proximity of the office and expenses associated with it. If the company provides an in-house child care zone it will be a relief for them which can be channelised on their productivity at the work.
In conclusion, the advantages of a childcare outweigh those of a present restaurant . I eagerly await the final decision of the club and wholeheartedly support to this cause.
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Read the following information.
You saw a car accident. Now you have been asked to write a report for the police describing the scene.
Write an email to the police in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:
• Explain when and where you saw the accident.
• Describe the road conditions, what you saw, and how many people and vehicles were involved.
• Explain who you feel was responsible and why.
Hello sir,
I am writing to draw your attention on the accident happened just an hour back on Saint Laurent street today in the morning. I am witness of this horrible accident today. There were two cars involved make it happened. A car of brand BMW X7 was driven by a 17 year drunk adult met and accident with parked car near the Old Port park. the Car is badly damaged that the front bumper and fender is totally broken. windshield has big crack and front bonnet is bent.
This life threatening accident resulted in huge traffics issue. three people is in critical condition and hospitalized on urgent basis and two were found dead on the spot. Road condition is very bad that it is not possible to take it on use until it get repaired. there is no traffic control staff at this moment who can undertake the situation.
I personally feel that it depicts poor parenting to their child and there should be strict action against this. This is third incident in city within a month. I hope Police and city authority will take steps against this.
your sincerely,
Ajay
Score 7
Task 1
Dear Store Manager,
I am writing this correspondence to express my profound disappointment regarding the regrettable purchase of tea cups from the Walmart, Square one store.
On December 17, 2023 , I acquired a set of six tea cups which was crafted in China for $110. I was filled with excitement as I intended to present this to my sister, Kelly , to embark her first Christmas in Canada. Given the store’s esteemed reputation, I presumed that all products underwent rigorous quality checks. But unfortunately, upon returning home, I discovered that two of the six cups were defective. Specifically, the handle had cracks, and one cup was completely shattered into pieces. Furthermore, the following day when I approached the sales agent , he denied to refund or exchange the item, despite the item being within the return policy guideline. The staff’s unsatisfactory behavior caught me off guard.
As a measure for keeping up the goodwill, I would request you to deliver the exact item to my billing address. Additionally, I would greatly appreciate a discount voucher for future use. I eagerly await a positive response from your end regarding this matter.
Yours Sincerely,
Jenny
Task 2
Engaging in the act of reading serves as a means of self-education. I express my gratitude for including me in the survey regarding development of the empty space. Although, some members may argue on using it as a conference hall. I firmly believe, Library will bring about numerous long-term benefits to our community. It will instil the habit of reading and foster social gatherings.
From my perspective, a library will be beneficial for all ages group as compared to conference hall catering to a small section. In this digital era, it is crucial to preserve the tradition of reading physical book. This will have a significant impact on the younger generation. Moreover, it can be accessed by non members, providing reachability. The balmy atmosphere of a library filled with books can re-introduce the reading habit to the community.
Additionally, from the revenue generated can be utilised to stock up on books which can be utilised by the reading club. The club will promote positive mental health and act as a means of social gathering within the neighbourhood.
In conclusion, the advantages of a library outweigh those of a conference hall. I eagerly await the final decision of the club and wholeheartedly support to this cause.
Task 1 Score 8
Task 2 Score 8
Great vocabulary, but watch your punctuation!
You’re experiencing problems with your heating and hot water. Write an email to your landlord, Draw his attention to the failure his attempts to resolve the problem, express your concerns about the low temperatures, and suggest a solution.
Dear Sir,
I hope you’re doing well. I am writing this letter to express my concern regarding our apartment. It’s been a long time, me and my roommates are facing difficulties due to hot water and sometimes heating problems too. Our apartment number is 330, and it’s 8411 street road. We are really stressed with these situations happening everyday and going through tough times.
Primarily, my purpose for this letter is to get the heater solved as early as possible. After spring, we have been facing this issue. Moreover, even though the temperature is -30 outside but inside our house, it’s always +10. We tried to contact the site manager, but whenever the maintenance guy comes to sort it out, it only works sometimes. Most days, we bathed in cold water for the whole fall period.
However, please have a look into it. Our neighbor was generous to us, as they had shared some portable heaters with us. We are tired of this every day. I would like an alternative now if you can provide us a vacant place till the time our apartment heater gets solved.
I really appreciate your help. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Raj Chandresh Kapadia.
Your city manager is trying to resolve some transportation infrastructure issues. He needs to decide whether to increase the number of bus stops and thereby reduce the distance between them or increase the number of buses and thereby their availability through the night. Th city has sent you an opinion survey asking you to identify and explain your preference for:
Option A: less distance between bus stops
Option B: more busses during the night
Dear Sir,
I hope you’re doing well. Thank you very much for considering me in an opinion survey of transportation for our city. In my personal view, If we increase the bus stop in order to lesser down distance it would be great, as it will be more favorable for all passengers.
Firstly, the distance right now it’s far away from my home. I always use public transport; sometimes it’s really stressful for me to walk for 20 minutes to get the bus. Secondly, the college pass by the road, so the bus is fully occupied often. Me and my neighbors, people living around face the same issue of walking time.
Furthermore, it’s tough for us to walk during fall because of the heavy snow. Keeping closer bus stops would be beneficial to every passenger in managing their time and work effectively. Citizens would be really grateful for having bus stops closer to their houses.
I hope my opinion is more meaningful based on the current situation, and other respondents feel the same too. Nevertheless, I will agree with your final decision. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
Raj Kapadia.
Task 1 Score 7
Task 2 Score 8
Last week you had travelled in a domestic airline due to some business. You did not had a good experience with that airline. The discontentment, due to the poor service, made you complain about the airline.
Write an email to the Airline in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:
Problems faced by regular passengers
Complain about the poor service
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter concerning my recent experience with your airline. On January 17, 2023, I travelled to Vancouver from Toronto on Air Canada EX 100.
Upon entering the plane, there was a foul smell and the aisle was disorganized and unclean. In addition to this, the washroom lacked basic water supply and the tissue papers were missing, which made the entire trip uncomfortable for the passengers onboard. Despite repeatedly complaining to the airhostess about the service, she did not pay much attention to the distress of the passengers.
Furthermore, upon landing at our destination, we were informed that our baggage has been re-routed and would result in delay for about 2 days. After discussing with fellow passenger, we came to the conclusion that the service of Air Canada has detoriated over the years. The unpleasant experience makes us wonder if we should use the service of Air Canada in the future. The overall experience was underwhelming and did not meet the standard of the price we paid for the fare.
I would appreciate if you could positively take the feedback and offer us enchanting journey in the future. I look forward to receiving a response from your end.
Regards,
Tina
Your city is planning to ban public smoking. The city has sent out an opinion survey to see what residents think about it.
Option A: Smoking should be banned in public places.
Option B: Smoking should not be banned in public places.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to express my appreciation for including me in the survey regarding ban of smoking in public places. From my perspective, smokers must not be allowed to use cigarettes in public places.
Firstly, it is widely acknowledged that smoking poses a significant threat to one’s health. If the city council permit the usage of cigarette outside of the personal space of an individual , it will send an unimpressive message to the society about promoting unhealthy habits. This is particularly concerning for the young-aged people who may be lured and indulge itself in the prohibited practice.
Secondly, non-smokers would indirectly be inhaling the poisonous smoke, especially in enclosed space such as restaurant, shopping complexes. Moreover, the smoke from the cigarette contains high level of toxicity which would increase the air pollution within the city.
In conclusion, implementing a ban on smoking in public areas would bestow considerable advantages. I anxiously await the final decision of the city council and wholeheartedly endorse this cause.
Score 8
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Read the following information.
You saw a car accident. Now you have been asked to write a report for the police describing the scene.
Write an email to the police in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:
• Explain when and where you saw the accident.
• Describe the road conditions, what you saw, and how many people and vehicles were involved.
• Explain who you feel was responsible and why.
Dear Police Officer,
I was a witness to a car accident that just happened this morning. I was at Kingston bus station and saw two cars run into each other at the intersection.
The road is full of traffic at that time, and the red sedan that going straight is clearly running a red light. The accident is really bad and I saw the two people in the red sedan hurt their heads and their shoulders were bleeding, there were children in the blue van that they ran into and I could not see how they were doing because the car window had been tinted, the woman that driving the blue van seemed ok.
I think the man driving the red sedan is clearly responsible for this car accident because he ignored the red light while driving. But I think you should talk to other witnesses to have a broader picture of this scene and get more information from different angles.
Please let me know if you need anything else.
Thanks,
Yiming
Score 7
You have been having problems with your computer. You took the computer to be repaired, but after being repaired, the computer doesn’t work well.
Write an email to the manager of the computer shop in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things: Ask what happened at the shop. Explain why you are not satisfied with the service. Describe what you want the manager to do.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter concerning the persistent issue with my computer. On January 10,2023, I had repaired my computer, HP 200C from your shop located at Erin Mills Town Center, Mississauga.
According to the technician, the battery life had expired and required a replacement which was duly done at your shop. However, the battery is dead again after just one week, due to which I am unable to operate the computer. This is particularly concerning as I have an upcoming project deadline that must be met; failing to do so would result in poor grade at my university.
I am extremely dissatisfied with the service provided, as I believe the root cause of the issue was not properly diagnosed and repaired. I request you to look into the matter urgently and send a technician to my home address to resolve the issue. Additionally, provide a temporary computer to compensate for loss of time suffered by me due to inadequate resolution.
Looking for a prompt response and an effective remedy from your end.
Regards,
Priyanka
Score 8
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Task 1:
Dear Sir,
I am writing to request you about the information of the Museum like Exhibits, opening timing and prices for the group of friend students coming to visit later next month.
They are coming to this country for the first time and all of them are teenagers, so I would like to ask you if there is any engaging programs or tasks for them when they visit the Museum.
I have been there couple of times, so I know it won’t be possible to cover up all the things in the museum but as they are going to stay in the city for almost 2 months, I wanted to request for any bulk discount or a monthly pass which will definitely help them to learn about it.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Ashok DY
Task 2:
Dear Mr.Alexey,
First of all, thanks for considering my inputs towards the employee retention program. I would be glad to shoot out my opinion.
As a, to be dad, I would definitely vote for Paternity leaves, I have a solid reason for this and assuming that will convince to consider my point strongly.
Paternity time is the most wonderful time of everyones lives, it is also equally stressful and pressurized, so giving some additional work day offs will help people enjoy the paternal period and that will increase the trust and empathy towards the company which will make them to continue in the organization for longer tenure.
Work life balance is something everyone should give first priority, so if the company is prioritizing the employee’s parental period and allowing to take additional work off will be a huge benefit for the parents and that will in turn make them stay longer in the office and enjoy their wonderful family time during paternity
Regards,
Ashok DY
Score 7
Please provide feedback
Your local community is putting on an art show and is a little unsure about displaying some of the submissions. In an effort to resolve their internal dispute, they have decided to survey the community. They’ve asked you to identify and explain your preference for two options:
Option A: Censor the artwork
Option B: Do not censor the artwork
I express my gratitude for including me in the survey regarding the act of censoring the artwork in the upcoming event at our community center in Mississauga. In my viewpoint, artwork displays imagination of the artist and should not be subject to censorship.
To commence with, art is a form of showcasing ideas and creativity by an artist whose only asset is their craft. I so believe, censoring their craft would limit the opportunities for the creator to display their talent in the show. Nevertheless, we can segregate the event into categories to make it more family-friendly.
In addition to this, if we discriminate based on the factor which qualify for censorship, it could have a detrimental effect on the event. We can end up having limited artists to perform or display their skill. Furthermore, it could send an unimpressive message to the community about the orthodox view of the committee responsible for making this decision.
To conclude, showcasing the different form of skill would bestow positive outcome. I eagerly await the final decision of the community and whole heartedly endorse the result.
Score 9
Your city manager is trying to resolve some transportation infrastructure issues. He needs to decide whether to increase the number of bus stops and thereby reduce the distance between them or increase the number of buses and thereby their availability through the night. Th city has sent you an opinion survey asking you to identify and explain your preference for:
Option A: less distance between bus stops
Option B: more busses during the night
Thank you for including me in the survey regarding the improvement of transportation in our city, Mississauga. In my opinion, additional number of buses during the nighttime would have significant benefits as compared to bus stops.
To begin with, our city is densely populated with international students who often have to work shifts to make their end meets. An increase in connectivity during the night would expand there opportunities to take up jobs at farthest distance. Furthermore, night jobs tend to offer higher pay rate as compared to day jobs, which would help them to sustain their living cost.
Secondly, the only mode of commute for the new immigrants is public transport. In addition to this, winter is rough and longest in our city. It would be a game changer, for newcomers or public, who are not able to afford a car in their initial months in Canada, if we increase the frequency of buses at night. The incremental fleet of buses at night would give them comfort to commute around the city in an ease.
In conclusion, an increase in buses at night would have great advantages. I eagerly await the final decision of the city and fully support this cause.
Score 9
Dear company survey team,
Thank you for taking the time to consider our opinion about this matter. In my view, we should have paternity leave, and my reasons are described below.
Firstly, having a newborn is an adjustment for everyone in the family, not only for the mother as we commonly thought. Although grandparents might take the lead in some chores at home, the father also needs to get used to the new routine. Secondly, it is extremely important that the father is off from work in the first weeks after the birth date, so not only can he help the mother who recovers from labor, but also be in charge of some tasks. For example, go grocery shopping, clean the house, and look after other kids or pets.
Once again, I firmly believe paternity leave will be a huge achievement for the employees, and I appreciate you asking for our view on this matter. I am sure the company will make the best decision for its employees.
Sincerely,
Ana Silva
Score 9
Dear Canadian Museum of Nature team,
I hope this email finds you well.
My name is Ana Carolina, and I work as a researcher at the University of Ottawa. I am contacting you because we are accepting about 30 international students for a short-term visit in the next months, and one of the scheduled activities is to visit a museum here in Ottawa. As I am in charge of this, I need more information to plan ahead the date and time of our trip.
Firstly, I would like to know the opening times during the next fall, more specifically in October. Additionally, could you give me information about ticket prices, and whether the museum has any special discount for students or for groups. Secondly, is there any special exhibition ongoing? On my last visit with my family, there was a butterfly exhibition quite interesting.
Thank you in advance. I have no doubts it will be a wonderful experience for the students.
I am looking forward to hearing back from you.
Sincerely,
Ana Carolina Silva
Score 8
Your company is struggling with employee retention and is considering implementing either paternity leave or a shorter work day to increase the loyalty of its highly-skilled workforce. It has sent you a survey asking you to identify and explain your preference for:
Option A – paternity leave
Option B – shorter workdays
Thank you for including me in the survey for Paternity leave policy. In my opinion, paternity leave would have a potential in winning employee’s loyalty as compared to shorter workdays.
Firstly, In the initial phase of parenthood, both partners are emotionally and physically drowned with the new phase of life. New parent, have thousand of problem and challenges to deal it. The introduction of paternity leave, would leave an impressive impact on the father and his family about the company. Moreover, this would help him lower his anxiety from juggling with the personal and professional commitment.
Secondly, this policy would be a revolutionary change on the mindset of employees within the company. Generally, workers are anguished, for the non-availability of special leave under these circumstances. In addition to this, the feeling not been able to contribute to his new born would have drastic impact on the performance at work. The polciy would be a breakthrough for showing affection to the other gender. Furthermore, it would have overwhelming response from the employees on their loyalty with the company, thereby, reducing the attrition rate.
To conclude, introduction of paternity leave would have a increasingly positive impact on the company’s future objective.
Score 8
You’re experiencing problems with your heating and hot water. Write an email to your landlord, Draw his attention to the failure his attempts to resolve the problem, express your concerns about the low temperatures, and suggest a solution.
Dear Mr Wu,
I am writing this e-mail regarding a persistent issue of heating and hot water at our rented apartment.
About two week back, the heating system of the entire unit unexpectedly stopped functioning. Currently, the temperature outside, here in Mississauga, is around 20″C, it had become increasingly challenging to cope with the temperature inside the apartment. Furthermore, Bed of nails, the hot water supply has stopped in both the kitchen and bathroom taps. As a student, it has taken a toll on my health and my immunity has gone down due to constant exposure of cold wind and water.
Although, as a temporary solution, the heating system has been fixed by the local electrician but it needs to be replaced immediately. According to his observation, the heating device inside the furnace is worn out and is causing the problem. And replacing the device would resolve the issue with the hot water supply as well.
Thank you for your co-operation. Expecting a quick response from your end to resolve the matter which has an impact on my health and well-being.
Regards,
Jasmine
Score 8
The new cheque book you ordered from your bank hasn’t arrived. It’s three weeks late! Write an email to your bank manager. In your email, complain about the bad service, explain how you paid, and ask what he can do.
Dear Mr Goyal,
I am writting this email to express my concern about the service provided by CIBC bank – located at Erin town Center. A month back, i had placed an order for a cheque book for my chequing account #0045. Eventhough,the representative assured it would be delivered within 15 days from the order received by the bank but i have not received any update as of today.
This showcase a very unprofessional behvaiour from a reputed bank branch . It is hampering my business since i have lot of payments to make to this month. It’s the first time, in my last 10 years holding the account, I have experienced such a service at your center.
I would request you to expedite my order (No 45893) and resolve the issue as soon as possible. If posting the cheque book takes additional days , I am fine to collect from the branch once available.
Thank you for your understanding.Looking for a response from your end.
Regards,
Priyanka
Score 7
Dear Sir,
My name is Vladislav, and I am writing this email to express my concern about problems with the heating and hot water. I know that you have been trying to resolve this issue, however, the problem has not been resolved and is outstanding, because I am still experiencing interruptions in heating and hot water.
I would have not been so concerned if it happened when the weather was warm and sunny. However, when it is freezing outside it is extremely inconvenient to come back to a cold apartment, where the temperature is literally the same as outside and moreover to find out that the hot water supply is not available as well. Taking into account that our apartment building has no other heating options, and it is unsafe to use portable heating systems when one is not home, I believe that this problem is demanding urgent measures.
Considering all the above mentioned, I can offer my help in solving this annoying problem. I can contact the management company of the apartment building and ask them to fix the water and heating issues. They usually take measures really fast and I hope they could assist with my concern as soon as possible.
Thank you for your consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you.
Kind regards,
Vladislav
Score 8
TASK 2
In the past few years, there has been an exponential increase in population due to Canada incentivizing the promise of a better life to immigrants. While some believe that the current system provides enough support, I firmly believe that some necessary programs could be added to benefit immigrants.
In the grand scheme of things, people all around the world are deciding to become Canadian citizens benefiting the economic growth of the country. However, some people end up going back to their countries because they did not receive enough support from the government. Starting a new life in an unknown country is very scary and challenging; therefore, some specific strategies should be implemented to make this transition as smooth as possible. For instance, opening an online forum, where newcomers can share their experiences, support each other, and learn from past mistakes. In addition, helping immigrants find a job accordingly to their skill sets, would target a strong sense of belonging. Finally, creating ceremonies or events where people can socialize and interact, would ensure the well-being of the new citizens.
All things considered, adding new strategies to help the immigrants in this challenging transition holds immense potential not only for the betterment of the immigrants but also, to ensure keep providing economic growth by settling permanently in the country
Score 11
Hello. Could you please check my writing?
Task 1:
Dear, Sir or Madam,
I am writing to report about an accident, which happened with me when I was driving one of your rental car.
I borrowed Toyota RAV 4 2017 on May 1st at your company in Brandon. One of your manager John Hart showed us the car, explained rules and policies of your company and gave us all necessary documents and keys.
Unfortunately, on May 6th we had a small accident on Highway number 5, not to far from Carberry. When we were on a road, some animal ran across the street, I think it was a deer. That is why I lost control and drove to the side of
After an accident, I called to the police and reported about this. Then, I checked my insurance and found it covered a minor accident.
I apologies about this situation. I hope that my insurance will cover all the cost of repairing the car. Thank you for your understanding. If you have any questions, please give me a call or write an e-mail.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Jonson.
Task 2:
Some people believe that women better parents than men, while other think that men have a bigger potential to be better parents. I am particularly agree with first opinion. There are several reasons why I believe that generally women can be better parents than men.
Firstly, women in their nature more sentimental, while men are more brutal by nature and often do not show their emotions. That is why women can understand children’s emotions and feelings better and give them more love and support.
Secondly, I believe that women have special relationships with their babies which were building during pregnancy and nursing. Therefore mothers have maternal instinct while fathers need more time to build relationships with children.
Finally, most women don’t mind to care kids and spent lots time with them, while men more worry about their careers and how to make their families feel safe and comfortable.
These are my reasons to believe why women can be better parents than men.
Score 7
Hi Angela, can you please rate my writing? thanks
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope you are doing well. I would like to introduce myself as a class teacher of 8th Grade Science subject in “Root Millennium School”. My students love to read your scientific books because not only your way of writing is concise, but it is easy to understand as well.
On next Thursday, there is a Book fair being organized by my students in school premises in which your piece of writings shall surely be in limelight. Besides, I am planning to invite you as a chief guest in this event so that my students would not only get a chance to meet their favorite writer but also will try to learn some useful insights on importance of effective writing.
Moreover, I would request you to give speech and throw some light on their most interesting topic i.e. “The speed of light” following with an engaging session like “Science Quiz” in which they will participate with keen interest and the winners will get exciting prices.
I am hopeful that you will accept my invitation.
Yours sincerely,
Joe Will
Score 7
Last week you had travelled in a domestic airline due to some business. You did not had a good experience with that airline. The discontentment, due to the poor service, made you complain about the airline.
Write an email to the Airline in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:
Problems faced by regular passengers
Complain about the poor service
To whom it may concern,
My name is sagar, and I always had a pleasant experience in you airline, but I would like to draw your attention towards the bad experience I had in your airline in last flight on May 25th of this month.
Firstly, I want to tell you that I was flying in business class, and at the time of lunch I had been told that they do not have enough business class food perhaps, they try to give me economy class food.
Moreover, I noticed this problem is faced by multiple times by regular passengers too. I was talking with my friend about whole incident, and he had an same experience in your flight as he is a frequent flyer of your airline.
I hope that you will look into this matter, and train your employees better for good customer service. Yours truly,
Sagar
Score 7
Can you please rate my writing:
Task 1:
Dear Manager,
I am writing to express my disappointment during my recently experience at ABC Restaurant on 4th May 2023. We was told to wait for 1 hour without any explanations even though we made a reservation at 7 and arrived on time. Finally, we had our table and ordered the food. The food came an hour hour later, and it was cold and dry. We had 3 servers who changed shifts during our dinner. None of them really served us as we were told to wait the whole time. One of the servers took back our food and did not serve us a new plate. Furthermore, they also got our drinks order wrong and did nothing to rectify. Finally, after 3 hours at the table without food and drinks, we had to leave empty stomach.
I have been to your restaurant before, and it was a great experience that was why I came back. But yesterday was truly disappointing. I hope you can look into improving the service, and provide enough trainings to the servers to better serve customer.
Thank you for reading my email.
Unhappy customer,
Namie
Task 2
A recreational park would be a better option because it provides a space for people of all ages to gather. A sports complex could provide children and adults bonding activities, at the same time encouraging active lifestyle. Studies have shown that large green space will increase happiness of the people living around it and provide many advantages for people who use the space. A small petting zoo has the potential for a fun outing for all ages, and educational opportunities for children. As we live in an increasing urban environment, most people will appreciate the experience they could have with animals. Studies also have shown that animals will decrease our stress level.
While a shopping complex could be great boast to the economy, provide many employment, and attract people moving into the city, it could also create competitions for many of the locally-owned cafes and retails we currently have in out city. The city also have a large shopping complex, even though it is further away, it has served the city well for many years. Overall, a recreational park would serve the city residents better than a new shopping complex.
Hi, Angela. Could you check please my tasks 1 and 2 and tell which score I could get?
Task 1.
Dear Mr. Smith,
The purpose of my writing today is to inform you about an inconvenience that happened to me when I paid deposit.
I stayed in Gull and Castle for 2 weeks since June 15. My room was bright and comfortable due to the large panoramic windows, the painting on the wall and the cozy furniture. I adored the breakfasts, which I had, especially bananas pancakes with strawberry sauce. My sincere thanks for amazing and memorable vacation.
Unfortunately, when I came back home and checked my bank account, I found that deposit, which I paid for guesthouse, was charged twice. In my opinion, it happened because the Internet connection, when I made the payment, was poor, and I accidentally paid twice.
I would appreciate if you could check your bank account to find my payment in order to check the authenticity of my letter. I hope you could help me to solve the problem and refund half deposit, which I paid, back.
Thank you for your assistance in this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Oksana.
Task 2
Somebody thinks that local newspapers are not popular in present time, but I believe, that newspapers are still important and popular, especially in our town.
As for me, newspapers should have more Local and International news for several reasons. Firstly, having more local news can help people better understand each other. We can learn more information about our area and discover new places or activities. For example, once, when I read a newspaper I found information about a new bookshop with used books. The shop owners are elderly people who do not use gadgets, that is why I could not find the same information online.
Regarding international news, it is essential to know what is happening in the world, because it can affect our country as well. For instance, fires in neighboring countries can threaten the air quality in our country or may be the cause of increased prices for imported goods.
Finally, thinking about all the people in our city, we should not forget about the seniors who still use newspapers to find information. That is why having more news in newspaper is better option for everybody.
Score 8
Hi Angela, could you please evaluate Task 1 writing?
Dear CIBC manager
I am a client of your bank since 2005 and I am writing this email to discuss about a loan I made in June last year. The exactly amount approved was 16.000,00 dollars and the payment schedule defined was monthly payments of 1000,00 dollars in 16 months, that 12 months have already paid.
I currently have a business renting campervans in Vancouver, and I needed certain amount to repair some vehicles. In addiction, I had not had many customer at that time, for that reason part of the money have used for advertising.
Since I opened this company I have been successfully reaching our goals, specially financially. However, last month an accident happened with two of our cars, which cause an expected expenses increase. Although my business is covered by an insurance, we had to pay in advance 100% of the bill and due to it, I am not able to pay the loan this month, but certainly I am able to pay it next month since I have claimed the amount for the insurance company and it was already approved.
Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to your response.
Regards,
Lawrence
Score 7
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m writing this email to express my concern about the food we ordered last time at your restaurant on Feb 23rd 2023.
We ordered two large pizzas, a cheesy garlic bread and a coke. Below are the highlighted problems we faced with the order:
1. Once ordered, the food is served to us too late, which is after 45mins.
2. Also, the pizza is too cold.
3. Sadly, the garlic bread we ordered was a cheesy one, but we got the garlic bread without cheese.
Since we have been to your restaurant many times, but haven’t had such a bad experience. So I would like to take this opportunity to highlight the issues with you to take necessary action on the concerns to avoid happening in the future.
As we all know, you’re such a famous and reputed restaurant in town. We don’t want you to lose the quality of the food which you made earlier.
Thanks for your consideration, and I look forward to hearing back from you.
Sincerely,
Arav S
Score 6
To whom it may concern,
I am wriing this email to notify you about my recent dining experience at your restaurant, which i felt was not upto the restaurant standards. First of all, I had to wait almost half an hour to be seated even though i had a reservation. The salad which i ordered was stale and the visual presentation was appetiting.
Moreover, Overall service was not good at all, i felt like the staff is not trained properly on how to serve the guest and the lady waiter who was serving our table was rude and unprofessional. When i wanted to speak with a supervisor she suddenly gave me a sassy look and told me she is not available.
I believe the staff needs some more training and guidance on how importance a customer satisfaction is for a restaurant. Additionaly, I request if you can provide a some sort of compensation in my next visit.
I hope you will take care of this issue and future experience will be great.
Yours Faithfully,
Rajat Patel
Score 7
Hello Angela, please evaluate below task 1 for celpip.
Dear Manager,
I am writing this email to complain about the low quality of service you provided on my last purchase from your website. I am Gizem and I am one of your loyal customers.
I have purchased “Fundamental of Geological Engineering” , version 13th book. I ordered this book and specifically this edition because I have a final exam at my university before my graduation. This exam is very important to me and I will attend at end of the April.
Firstly, when I placed the order of the book, delivery time is displayed 2 weeks after my purchasing. It was a wonderful new for me but unfortunately, I have waited for this book for one and a half months.
When I received the book, I realized that it was the 11th edition which is not useful for my exam. I tried to reach customer service to express my feelings about this unexpected situation, but I couldn’t get an appropriate answer from the agent.
I request you to send “Fundamental of Geological Engineering” , book 13th edition to me. I hope that you will consider the urgency of the situation.
Appreciate your urgent help in the matter.
Regards,
Gizem
Score 8
Hello Angela please score celpip task 1
Dear Sara,
Belated happy birthday to you!
Hopefully, you are in great spirits! Please accept my apologies for not being part of your birthday celebration, but I’m making up for it via this email; at least I hope so!
On that day, when I was about to leave for your birthday event, I got a call from my neighbor saying that her son got injured while playing in the garden and she want me to take them to the hospital. I couldn’t deny it and did what was required in that situation. In such an emergency, I could not even ring you to tell you that I’m not coming.
I’m hoping you will understand the matter and forgive me, However, In order to compensate for this, I have arranged a dance party at my place this Saturday at 8:00 pm. I have invited all our college friends to the party. Can’t wait to see you soon!
Please accept my apologies once more!
Best Regards,
Ronak
Score 8
Hi, please could you help evaluate below task 1 and 2 Celpip.
Task 1
Dear Manager,
I am writing this letter in regarding with the order that I did yesterday in you restaurant. I am a old customer in your restaurant.
As I say, I ordered yesterday a pizza with specific ingredients. I am allergic to pepper and when I did the order a choose some ingredients to build my own pizza, but unfortunately things not happen the way I ask. My pizza came with pepper, and I would not be able to eat. I was starver and I had a bad surprise with that. I tried but if I had eaten bad things could been happen me because of my allergy. I tried to speak with your waitress, but the services were very bad.
I believe your restaurant should be take more attention the way that waitress attend customer. However, I considered that your restaurant must have to do something for me, as I mention I am your customer for long time ago. I suggest you give me a coupon or a gift card with no limit date to spend in your restaurant, for example.
I hope looking from you an answer about my situation.
Sincerely,
Vanda Domingos
Task 2
Cities with shopping complex are very attractive for communities and visitors as well.
I considered that is important small towns have shopping mall because is more affordable for their community spend time there and turn things easier, for example, people do not need drive or take public transport to go to a mall. Unfortunately, in my city we need to drive or take the bus to go a mall or movie theatre. Is a small town and we do not have this attractive things near to us.
On the other hand, restaurants and large supermarket give us more options when we are looking for different things or something specific and most of the time are concentrate in shopping mall as well. For example, for big brands is better have stores in these places because the impact will be large in different segments.
In short, I believe when a town is coming out with large areas, is important take attention to create attractive places such as malls for communities.
Task 1 Score 7
Task 2 Score 7
Hello Angela could you please review and comment on my CELPIP task 1 and task 2 and overall how much would be my score than you.
Dear Manager,
I am writing this email in regarding to the product which I have purchased at your department store few days back. I purchased a set of china tea cups but when I reached home and unpacked it unfortunately few tea cups were broken.
I immediately took the receipt and rushed to the store, inorder to exchange the damaged goods with a new one but to my notice I was so shocked with the reckless behavior of your department staff and the way they responded to my situation, they totally refused to take back the tea cups and replace me with a new one even though I had the receipt for the purchased product. I am sorry to say this but, your staff lacks proper customer service and zero knowledge of how to handle such critical situations.
Inorder to resolve this issue I would like you to compensate me with a new set of tea cups or a refund of whole amount immediately when I visit the store.
Looking forward for a positive resolution to this problem. Thank you.
Regards,
Erica
TASK 2:
According to my opinion I would prefer that the available area can be used for library purpose rather than a conference hall. Libraries can be useful to gain much more information as well as spending quality personnel time for brainstorming new ideas for all age groups and for retired officers too.
Having a library in the officers club can be beneficial for the club members as well as other individuals too. It can help teenagers access to books for their educational purposes and also be a great help for developing writers to spend their time focusing on writing in a silent and calm environment which is available at library. However they can even refer to books which can help the writers to come out with great ideas and publish books which can be sold at our library.
Apart from this, club members can conduct book fairs through which they can attract book lovers to attend and raise profits for the wellness of the club.
In conclusion I would say that in this modern world full of technology many lost their insight about libraries benefits inorder to manifest it back this area in the club should be utilized for a library.
Score 7 for both tasks
I’m glad you find it helpful.
Please evaluate below task 2 for celpip.
I like to opine in favor of option A, printing more local and worldwide news would much prominent to readers rather than offering huge discounts, I will share my viewpoint in this survey.
Firstly, nowadays news is an essential part of our life which gives us better knowledge of what sort of things are happening around us. In our city your newspaper has marvelous testimonials, people have been believed only your paper has accurate news from top to bottom around us and internationally. I strongly recommend you to introduce a weekend special edition more news about debates which occurring on climate change this will help people to educate how the scientist is keeping their efforts on their commitments.
On the other hand, having more discounts for subscribing to newspapers doesn’t make any sense without having proper content or matter on news. Offers can increase your revenue but not faith in your newspaper.
To sum up, I have stated above my viewpoint to print a lot of news instead of focusing on discounts. By reading the news people can gain better general knowledge and how to move in this era. I appreciate the chance to provide to me to voice my opinion.
Hi Kumar, your survey response would score 7. Focus on clarity