CELPIP Writing Samples

After witnessing an accident, the police have asked you to write a report describing what you saw, who was involved, the road conditions, and who you feel was responsible

To Whomsoever it may concern,

Im writing this letter to mention on the recent accident in xxxxx avenue,Toronto which took place on 23rd Jan,2024 and I was around there who saw this unprecedented accident happened.I was shocked.

It was actually a gloomy day with slightly darker on the sky and it was drizzling little bit. As the street road was little rough,driving needs to be cautious.Nevertheless, that day the driver was looking bit rash in handling the car , applying brakes slightly delayed caused a mild push on to the pedestrian,causing her hurt but not with any major injuries.
Furthermore,the driver was not guilty for his act instead was horning at the pedestrian for not crossing the line,which absolute foul as per traffic rules.

The above-mentioned information is completely true as per my experience at the spot.

Thanks
XXX

The idea of getting leave after a baby has been a subject of considerable discourse. I posit that paternity leave represents a far more appropriate alternative.

The first two months after becoming parents are the most exhausting and precious too. This stance crystallizes when considering fatigue one gets from sleepless nights, it becomes tough to wake up on time and join the work with full energy. Therefore, it is obvious that one would wish to get leave from work.

Needless to say, it is one of the important periods of life when wife needs maximum support from her husband in taking care of newborn and herself, since It is crucial part of her life in which she suffers from physical as well as emotional trauma due to new transition of becoming mother. Plus, most of the appointments for growth check, vaccination, newborn’s documentation etc, takes place in first few months.

In the light of preceding arguments, I maintain that getting paternity leave is absolutely amazing and truly helpful idea.

You’re experiencing problems with your heating and hot water. Write an email to your landlord. Draw his attention to the failure of his attempts to resolve the problem, express your concerns about the low temperatures, and suggest a solution.
Dear sir,
My name is Sukhvir Kaur, and I live in a 150A apartment in the Greenland Apartments building, which is owned by you. I am writing to you regarding the few problems that I have been having in my apartment for the last month. Actually, I had written a letter to you before concerning hot water and heating problems in my house but no actions was taken and I did not get any reply from you either. Therefore, I have to write a letter again to draw your attention toward this problem. Since the beginning of January, my apartment heating and hot water supply does not worked, first, I thought it might be a problem for the whole building but when I told to my neighbors, everything was perfectly working in their apartment. Then I wrote you about the issue but did not get any reply. Outside, if weather is -2 degree, inside the house it is more lower, which makes it difficult to live in the house. We are not able to sleep until midnight due to cold inside. I would like you to fix this issue as soon as you can, because otherwise we have to look for another place. In this harsh winter, it is really a problem not to have a hot water supply and working heat in the apartment. I hope to get a reply and an effective solution from you soon.
With regards
Sukhvir kaur

I was informed that the management is considering banning the utilization of barbecues on the balconies. Although some neighbours strongly oppose the suggested regulation, I am in favour of it.

Above all, the primary reason for advocating the proposed idea is the safety hazards. In case of negligence of the safety measures, the possible risks of fire can be significantly disastrous, leading to financial and health-related issues. If the fire expands to the whole building, not only the lives of the residents, but their housing and living space would also be in danger. Furthermore, some people with specific health situations, such as allergies and asthma, are more sensitive, even to regular smoke and fumes generated when someone is using a barbecue.

On the other hand, while I agree that people should be entitled to enjoy the pleasant weather during summer, there are a lot of free public areas dedicated to outdoor barbecue and picnic activities, where individuals can enjoy both nature and their food.

Considering the mentioned reasons, I believe that there should be new legislations to restrict the residents from barbecuing at home due to the possible fire hazards and other health-related situations.

I was informed that the city authorities are unveiling plans to improve the public transport. Although some argue that more bus stations are necessary, I think that increased number of buses is in city dwellers’ best interest.

Before all else, limited number of buses has resulted in an unreliable public transport at night, with at least an hour between each bus arrival at a station, causing discomfort for the passengers, particularly during severe weather conditions. Furthermore, with more buses available in the transportation system more frequent departures would take place from each station, resulting in lower wait times. Hence, if one bus is missed, it won’t be long until the next arrives.

On the other hand, the primary reason for opposing the idea of adding more stops is the negative impact that this action might have on the overall travel duration. It would take the bus longer to reach each station if it is to stop more often at increased station, which would be why people with tight schedules or the ones in a hurry would not prefer public transport over private vehicles anymore.

Considering the abovementioned reasons, I believe increasing the buses not only affects the over-night services, but it also creates a more efficient public transportation during the day.

hiiii Angela,

Your local community is putting on an art show and is a little unsure about displaying some of the submissions. In an effort to resolve their internal dispute, they have decided to survey the community. They’ve asked you to identify and explain your preference for two options:
Option A: Censor the artwork
Option B: Do not censor the artwork

I express my gratitude for including me in this survey of community preference to choose either restricting the art work or leave it unrestricted. Personally, I believe filterizing submissions would have more convenient to people.

To commence with, this is a public show of art, since there would be no age limit assigned to this show all age groups would be present.Therefore, censorship of art show would make sure young ones do not get the exposure to explicit material. This will protect the children from material, that their brain cannot comprehend efficiently , especially in a positive way.

In addition to it, Not only the censorship would benefit the children but also the artists. interestingly when we put the limits to their art,it would be a challenge for them to think out of the box. Although, this could be difficult, but i believe most of them would embrace this with open arms. For instance, giving a opportunity to professionals to leave their comfort zone, become more versatile. Hence, creating a win-win situation for everyone.

Conspicuously, setting limits on the upcoming art event would bestow positive outcome. I eagerly await the final decision and wholeheartedly endorse the final decision.

Task 1:

Dear Ms. Robinson,

I am writing this email to provide an answer to your request regarding replacing the receptionist during her lunch break. Despite my willingness to assist you with this matter, I am deeply sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to perform this task.

The main reason for not accepting this offer is that I have to follow a tight schedule to meet the deadlines regarding a new project, leaving me with no time to allocate to another task. Considering that the reception’s task demands excessive effort, I am certain that it would be impossible for me to handle.

Although I am not able to take on this new responsibility, there are other colleagues who will be delighted to help you. In case none of our current employees agrees to do so, you can consider hiring an assistant receptionist. With today’s competitive job market, there are a lot job seekers who would be thrilled to work in our well-known company.

I hope you understand my reasons for rejecting your request. Should you have any questions regarding my suggestions or require any assistance for implementing them, do not hesitate to contact me.

Best regards,
SE

Task 2:

Although some argue for the benefits of the in-person examination, I believe that the report might be a better assessment of our writing skills.

The primary reason for advocating the submission of a report instead of taking the exam is the positive impacts that this method can have on student’s performance. Being at a relaxed ambience, we can have a better concentration span, assisting us to come up with more innovative ideas to write about. Furthermore, the chances of being distracted and use incorrect grammatical structures or a limited range of vocabulary would be lower at the comfort of one’s home.

On the other hand, writing a task for 3 hours is exhausting for everyone, negatively effecting their scores. This might disappoint some students and prevent them from continuing the writing courses. I would agree that the supervision provided in the classroom during an in-person exam prevents people from cheating, however, all of my classmates are grown-ups willing to improve their writing skills, with no intention to fake the results.

Considering the reasons mentioned above, I am of the opinion that a report written at home is preferable over the conventional way of examination .

Hi Angela:
A local newspaper is planning to launch a new magazine section dedicated to spiritual education.

I was informed that the local newspaper is considering introducing a magazine section specific to spiritual education. Although some argue that doing so would not attract enough audience, I believe such an educating section is in everyone’s best interest, and I will elaborate on my opinion in the following paragraphs.

The primary reason for advocating for including the mentioned section is the crucial impact of spiritual knowledge on people’s wellbeing. In today’s fast-paced world, where everyone is leading a hectic life, one usually overlooks the significance of mental health. Addition of spiritual section in the magazine encourages people to acquire knowledge about this topic and be more mindful.

Another advantage of educating people about spirits is that it results in further understanding of mutual respect, moral values, and positiveness in the community, hence turning individuals to more positive and productive citizens.

Considering the reasons mentioned above, I personally believe that spiritual education should be included in the magazine as it not only exerts beneficial effects on each person’s mentality but also turns our city to a safer and more friendly environment.

Hi Angela, could you please score my Task-1?

Dear Sir,

The purpose of writing today is to lodge a complaint regarding the room heating and intermittent warm water issue I have been experiencing in my apartment for days.

I would like to bring up two unsuccessful attempts of yours, which led to these incessant aforementioned problems. Since your three-story building is built upon an archaic design, its desideratum of monthly water-pipe maintenance is also crucial. Additionally, you became absentminded not only in using old electric heaters but also in repairing them on time.

Moving to the dilemma with the services, I want to bring out two concerns. Initially, if the low temperature continues, it will set up cracks and malfunction of water pipes. Moreover, sleeping at night without keeping the house warm can cause hypothermia.

Allow me to suggest two of my opinions. Firstly, you may hire an electrician to ensure the exact electric voltage of the apartment. If I may, it is highly recommended that you hire a professional plumber to scrutinize water pipes.

Your cooperation is highly appreciated. Furthermore, in this matter, an open line of communication from your side would help out immensely.

Yours Sincerely,
Rafi

Lately, I discovered that our company is excogitating to implement a facility to boost the loyalty of high skilled workforce and contemplating two sentiments. While some protestations that paternity leave should be introduced, I personally believe that a shorter work day would be the best choice.

An irrefutable justification for my unwavering support for shorter work days is that it will help employees spend quality time with family besides work. Firstly, it becomes very stressful for an individual to spend time with the dearest people after handling clients for long shifts. Therefore, the monotonous behavior of workers will also decline as they will get some time for self-pampering.

A further rationale for repudiating paternal leave is that it will create pressure on co-workers. Moreover, some customers prefer to deal with a specific person; they will find it inappropriate when others provide the service. Before all else, one’s sequence of work will be bothered by the interference of others, as everyone has an individual path of doing work.

To recapitulate, drawing from the information provided above, conspicuously, I fervently advocate that the company should roll out shorter working days so that it provides workers with some family time and does not create any pressure on other employees.

Task 1 – complaint about cheque book

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about your poor bank service and claime for order my new cheque book.
Three weeks ago I am filling out the some form for order a cheque book and paid with cash. Buy the way, your staff promised, I will get my cheque book through six business days. But, now all ready one mounth while I am waiting for my cheque book.
Anyway, I would like have this cheque book. Please, let me know how many I am will wait for my cheque book. And I am schould pay some bills for my rent appartment and facilities heating, elecric, cell phone, they all have only one way for paintment and that is cheque !!!Can the bank cover my payments while I am got the cheque book ?
As a new custumer, can I have your support for me, Because, I am feeling like not valued customer in your bank. If you do not support me, I will change bank for another one.

Thank you for your attention to me,
Best wishes,
Alex Bolduin

Hi Angela, can you please rate my writing? thanks

Dear Sir/Madame,

I was recently on flight number X1234 from San Francisco to Montreal on February 25th, 2024. This flight was operated by Flair Airlines, departing from San Francisco at 10:30 A.M.

I am writing this email to inform you that I was not able to find my suitcases although I stayed at the airport 2 hours after the arrival time to search every corner for my baggage! I firmly believe that this luggage has either been put in a different flight to another destination or it has been stolen, revealing the lack of security at the airline.

I want to request immediate action for resolving the current problem. My suitcase was an anniversary gift from my partner and I also had a number of valuable items inside it. Please let me know if it is possible to arrange an investigation for finding lost luggage. In case it cannot be found, please send me the required documents to sign, requesting compensation for my assets as well as difficulties that I have faced.

Should you require further information, do not hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Best,
Alex Williams

Task2:
I was informed that the school is considering introducing a limit on the weekly hours that students can dedicate to a career. Although some argue that students need to work more to earn a living, I believe they should not spend more than 15 hours per week on working, and I will elaborate on my opinion in the following paragraphs.

The primary reason for advocating the mentioned limitation is the importance of having enough time for studying after classes. Most students spend half of their day at university and if they work for long hours, they would be left with no time to study and prepare for their exams. This can result in multiple failures, disappointing them from pursuing education.

Apart from the time issue, there would be too much pressure, both mentally and physically, on someone working and studying simultaneously. Most youngsters won’t be able to carry that burden and handle multiple responsibilities, leading to their lower concentration spans during university time and even at work.

Considering the aforementioned reasons, I believe that maximum 15 hours per week is more than enough for students to work. It is important for the youth to stay focused on their studies while not being exhausted by too much pressure.

Task1– Complaint about non-receipt of the chequebook i ordered

Dear smith,

I am writing today to express my deep level of dissatisfaction with the services rendered to me at your bank branch since I requested a new chequebook three weeks ago.
As you know I am a very busy business contractor who is involved in a lot of travels and engages the services of lots of vendors and work-forces. As a result, I deal more with cheques rather than cash. It was brought to my attention on Friday 2-2-2024 (two days before my request) that I had just fifteen cheque leaflets left and we were just a few days into the month, I drove through the bank that day rather than requesting online because I didn’t want any delay and I was scheduled to travel the next day. I waited four hours in a long queue that day because others had appointments before me, but I didn’t mind, I waited paid, and traveled the next day. I was told in six days it would be mailed to me. One week into the period I sent a reminder mail, same thing after another week, today makes it three weeks of sending several reminder emails and calling. This has caused me a lot of payment issues, especially with the purchase of goods and settlement of my workforce, I had to call in favors so as not to stop work or bear losses in the work process. I am highly disappointed with this service that is why I have decided to write to you, please what can you do about this? I would appreciate it if you look into this as soon as possible, and let whatever the issue is be resolved and my chequebook mailed to me by this week or I will have to try another bank for better services.

Thanks In Anticipation Of Your Response
Moses Ehis

Task 1 – complaint about cheque book

Dear Mr. John Doe,

I am writing to express extreme dissatisfaction with the delay of the cheque book I purchased which was supposed to be delivered three weeks ago.

My name is Sangboak Lee and I’ve ordered a cheque book from your bank but it has not arrived yet and I have not received any notification of the delay. When I called to the call center, one who answered treated me really bad and he didn’t apologize regarding the issue at all.

Moreover he mentioned that the purchase of the cheque book was confirmed because it was not completely paid 5 weeks ago. However I am sure that I’ve already paid them with my bank account. To prove it, I’ve attached the confirmation note of the transaction.

I request an appropriate action immediately and ask for a compensation plan to make up for my loss caused by this issue. I have been planning to use it this weekend, but it does not seem like I will be able to get the book on time. So I had to get an emergency loan for the weekend.

I look forward to hearing back from you soon regarding the problem.

Sincerely,
SB Lee

paternity leave

I recently heard that the management is considering introducing a new employee benefit of paternity leave or shortening workdays.

Whereas some argue that the perk of shorter workdays is more beneficial, I personally feel that paternity leave is a better option. I will explain the reasons in the following paragraphs.

First of all, I believe paternity leave is a more valuable benefit because most of the highly skilled staff in our company are married, middle-aged male thanks to their job characteristics. Which means that they are most likely the group of people who will benefit from the new policy. And the most important thing is that my wife and I will have a baby soon.

Secondly, even if the benefit like shorter workdays makes some of the employees happier in the short-term, however I personally don’t feel like that. Because I already have an enormous amount of work to do nowadays, so overall working hours will be almost identical.

In conclusion, based on the information provided in the paragraphs above, I strongly claim that you should choose paternity leave as a new policy because my circumstances make me believe that it’s more beneficial to me.

I appreciate the municipal corporation’s approach to include the citizens of the city to opine on whether to build an athletic facility center or a baseball ground.
I firmly believe that inclining towards an athletic center would have a substantial impact. There are a few reasons that support my stand.

At the onset, building a state-of-the-art infrastructure for our sportspeople would have a significant impact on their overall training and physical health.
They might be able to bring fame back to the region by competing at the international level.
This will allow the proliferation of the respective sport. If such a complex is built, it will encourage the masses to tune towards unorthodox sports.
As a result, more revenue generation in that sport.

On the other hand, some groups of people might incline towards the baseball stadium, but I am strongly against it.
They think it could act as a revenue generator for the city. But a sport like baseball is not much played in these regions of the country.
Therefore, the main pillar of their argument might not stand in reality.

In conclusion, I trust that my insights will be beneficial in reaching a decision. I place my confidence in our council and their decision-making process, and I eagerly await the resolution.

Hi, could you please evaluate my Task 1 response:

You are looking for a part-time job at a football club. Write a letter in about 150-200 words to the manager of the football club. Your email should do the following things:

– Introduce yourself
– Explain what experience and special skills you have
– Tell him/her when you think you could start

Response:
Dear Manager,

My name is Supriya, and I am writing to express my interest in the role of Counselor (Part-time) at the Horns Football Club. I am currently a PhD candidate at the University of Lethbridge, investigating the impact of negative and positive reinforcement on professional football players. I also have a Master’s degree in Counseling Psychology from Thapar University with a 4.0 GPA.

During my one year experience as a sports counselor at Lethbridge Public School, I supported the coaches with various motivational and player development workshops, alongside one on one sessions with the players themselves. I was also responsible for mediating intra team conflicts and helping students navigate their football journey alongside their academics. Additionally, I did a 6-month internship with YMCA Lethbridge as a counselor, helping clients with their fitness schedule.

I believe that my skills and experience make me a perfect fit for this role. I am attaching my resume with this email for your ready reference. I will be available to begin my duties starting April 1, 2024. I look forward to joining your team and making a positive impact.

Warm Regards,
Supriya

Greetings Angelia, please evaluate my task 1.

Your employer has asked you to organize a trip for a group of foreign students who are visiting from other countries. Write an email to a local museum asking about their exhibits, opening times, and prices.

Greetings Sir/Madam.

Salutation of the day!

I am writing this email to enquire and arrange a trip to our local museum.

I am working as a professor in an esteemed university located in Halifax. I have personally visited our local museum several times since my birth. Undoubtedly, our museum is one of the attractions for local as well foreign tourists. Since, the university has global presence, students from different countries are assembling in Halifax for an innovative experimental project.

Out of the blue, university decided to organize a trip to museum for these foreign students. I am privileged to have the responsibility of organizing this event. We are planning to have a trip on second or third weekends of next month. I would like to enquire such as current exhibits, opening timing and prices for groups. I hope group discounts are available in spring session as well.

I look forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,
Jai

I would really appreciate if you could grade my answer. Thanks
Question:
You are making a plan for a summer vacation. You are interested in several tour options you found online while browsing.
Write an email to a travel agency in about 150-200 words.
◦ Your email should do the following things:
◦ Tell the travel agency where you want to go
◦ Describe what you are interested in
Ask about the cost and payment options

Dear Mr. Jones,

I am writing this email to enquire about the two different tour options that I discovered on your amazing tours website. I am currently conflicted between the goa and Lakshadweep tour packages for my honeymoon on first week of May 2024 for 5days and 6 nights.

I chose these two places as our top options, as we wanted to spend this summer vacation with sunny beach, sea view hotels, and romantic sunsets. Alongside beaches, we are also extremely interested in the activities like snorkeling, surfing, kayaking and other fun beach activities. As we are an adventurous couple, we would like to spend the days in activities and the nights with some romantic candlelight dinners.

Additionally, I would also like to know about the cost for an all-inclusive tour package for the both above-mentioned places on these specific dates. On the same note, I also wanted to enquire about what are other flexible payment options that you currently offer?

I would really appreciate if you could reply with the detailed packages comparing my options, payments and with your genuine suggestion. Thank you so much in advance and looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Kind regards,
John Smith

Please evaluate below task 1 for celpip.

Dear Zoo Authority,

I am writing to raise a concern over the uncanny experience that happened in the Zoological Park.

Recently, I visited the Zoological Park with my family on Sunday. It was crowded during the holiday season. We have witnessed of most unpleasant incident of our life to see a man died after falling into the tiger’s enclosure. IN front of our eyes we saw a man attacked by a tiger and died horribly.

To begin with, I would like to complain about the fencing around a tiger’s area which is very short and not protected. On top of that, fencing was very near to enclosure.

Overall, considering the above given aforementioned scenario based on what I have provided you today, conclusively the safety of visitors should be upmost priority by Park authorities.

I am looking forward to seeing how my suggestions and concerns are taken into consideration to avoid unwanted incidents in the park.

Please take serious note of this and restrain having the above-mentioned incident.

Thank You,

Rick Martin

You work in a very big office. There is a popular and cheap restaurant in the building. The boss is thinking of removing the restaurant and replacing it with a childcare facility for the working parents in the office. You have been asked to respond to an opinion survey.
Option A: I think we should keep the restaurant.
Option B: I think we should replace the restaurant with a childcare facility.

Thank you for allowing me to be part of this survey. I opine that keeping the restaurant is a more apropos option than replacing it with childcare.

Conspicuously, having a separate place to eat appetizing meals and relax while on break from work, seems more pragmatic rather than surrounded by children, crying and playing around. Not only this, a restaurant with an office will cut the time, which employees are going to squander to find a nearby food outlet.

Surprisingly enough, since most of the employees are single, I believe the childcare facility will only be a waste of resources with no use. Nonetheless, a food outlet with a variety of delicious food directly boosts work performance, as it will give workers the energy they need to work all day long.

Based on the aforementioned reasoning, I still stand by my stance that having a restaurant has more pros than putting childcare support in an office.

Your city manager is trying to resolve some transportation infrastructure issues. He needs to decide whether to increase the number of bus stops and thereby reduce the distance between them or increase the number of buses and thereby their availability through the night. The city has sent you an opinion survey asking you to identify and explain your preference for:

Option A: less distance between bus stops

Option B: more busses during the night

Please evaluate my score.
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Dear Sir,

Thank you for including me for this survey. I opined that option B is best to overcome the current situation of transportation in our city.

As a loyal customer, I use bus transit services for my day-to-day commutation. I have first-hand experience of the current condition. Our city needs additional buses to address the crowd issues as buses do not have capacity to take more than 30 passengers. Adding buses with short trips or long trips or few with express services would help everyone to plan the journey for their route accordingly and therefore reduce the crowd in the bus.

Furthermore, in the peak hours of weekdays for offices and colleges, extra buses would help employees and students. In addition to that, more buses operating during the night hours would help night-shift employees, people returning from cineplexes or other recreational areas. It can also help people to travel easily in any weather conditions like snow or rain.

Therefore, I would suggest that if we could get more buses in our city, it will be very beneficial for the regular patrons. I look forward to hearing the final decision from you and I hope most of the community share the same view as mine.

Regards,

M. Ahamad

Hi Angela,
Could you please evaluate my writing? Thank you

The mayor’s office asked you to respond to an opinion survey about bookstores. Your neighbourhood has 3 old bookstores, but there is a plan to build a new and very large bookstore, which will put the little stores out of business. The mayor is conducting a survey before the construction starts.

Choose the option that you prefer. Why do you prefer your choice? Explain the reasons for your choice. Write about 150-200 words.

Option A: I think we should keep the old bookstores.
Option B: I think the big new store is a great idea.

The bookstore has been a heatedly discussed topic among residents. In my opinion, establishing a new large store offers more significant advantages.

To begin with, the new bookstore can enhance the experience of patrons. This is because the new bookstore will be decorated with a variety of advanced amenities, such as brand-new seats, the latest computers and multi-functional printers. In this way, readers can enjoy a more comfortable experience in the new bookstore.By contrast, many of my neighbours have complained that the current bookstore is so outdated. Last Friday my father found that the computer loaded extremely slowly, hindering his efficiency in reading documents online. 

In addition to improving the experience of readers, the new bookstore can also meet a larger number of reading requirements and preferences. In most cases, the bookstore is capable of stocking a wider range of books in a larger space. To be honest, I have always been unable to find my preferred Sci-Fi books in the current bookstore, as its area is so small that it only stocks a few numbers of books. I believe the spacious new bookstore will be able to address such problems and even provide more varieties and genres of books.

In conclusion, taking these above-mentioned factors into serious consideration, I firmly prefer the construction of a new bookstore as the more valuable choice.

I firmly believe that courses focused on practicality would significantly benefit students, enhancing their subjects’ understanding as well as showcasing their skills effectively.

Before all else, incorporating practical assignments such as case study in current life events would offer better insight into the subject matter. Since, students would be working on actual events such as original company sales strategies, natural events by visiting in person those places, it would provide firsthand experience rather than in a classroom setting studying through study materials.

Furthermore, While working on practical assignments, typically, students perform all activities in groups, which eventually foster a collaborative environment like working on actual projects for the company. Likewise, if a student’s final evaluation would be done based on projects and presentation then it would demonstrate actual knowledge of subjects grapes during their study.

Conclusively, Given first hand practical assignments cater to students real life experience and opportunity to showcase their skills and knowledge effectively, I strongly advocate for implementing such a course curriculum in college programs.

Hi Angela,
Would you be able to please evaluate my writing?
I would be very grateful to you!

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You have recently moved to another province and need your internet service set up. You chose the company you would like to go with and made an appointment. However, nobody arrived at the scheduled time.
Write an email to the company in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:
Explain the problem.
Tell them why you need internet service.
Suggest what the company should do now.

To Bell’s Customer Support Team,

My name is Daria, and I’m writing this email to you regarding an incident that occurred today.

Recently, I have moved from Quebec to Ontario hence, I have a huge to-do list in order to settle myself happily in the new place. Luckily, or, in contrast, to my great disappointment, I chose your company as the preferred internet provider. Consequently, I arranged an appointment with one of your managers for a specific time today. As a result, after waiting for a few hours, I realized that no one would come today.

I want to draw your attention to the fact that I emphasized to the manager several times that I need to set up the internet as soon as possible due to my remote type of work.

A great disregard for the committed appointment today from your sire forced me to think about how eagerly you are open to new clients and how much you value them.

I don’t know whether it was a concatenation of circumstances or not, but I believe I’m entitled to a compensation replacement or any kind of compliment from your side.

If you are still interested in acquiring a new client, then I’m looking forward to seeing your quick response.

Your cooperation in this matter is greatly appreciated.
Daria

Your company is struggling with employee retention and is considering implementing either paternity leave or a shorter work day to increase the loyalty of its highly-skilled workforce. It has sent you a survey asking you to identify and explain your preference for:
Option A – paternity leave
Option B – shorter workdays

Thank you for including me in your survey to identify your employees’ benefits preferences. Personally, I feel that a shorter work day is a desirable option for me. There are many reasons behind this choice that I would have made, and I would highlight the most crucial to me.

The topic of the shorter work week/day has been a hotly debated topic amongst individuals. Whereas some argue that it is not efficient, I have read enough scientific research and materials to confirm the opposite. It’s truly said that a shorter work day helps to keep a healthy work-life balance for employees. Consequently, in this way, we would improve the working environment significantly which reflects the business’ productivity directly.

It is important to bear in mind the fact of the average age of our employees, and given that, paternity leave might not be appropriate and suitable for the majority.

On top of that, having shorter workdays on the list of your benefits would be a strong achievement and benefit in the face of new potential talents.

Nevertheless, I would support any of your decision.

I hope I’ve been able to answer your survey sufficiently.

Request to evaluate Part 1.
Q: You are taking an evening class at your local university, which is related to your job. On the last day of class, your professor announces that she is leaving the university because she was hired as a full-time professor at another university.

* Express how you feel about her leaving and her new position.
* Explain what you enjoyed about her class.
* Request to stay in contact and suggest a few ways to do so.

Dear Dr. Kamala,

I am your student, attending evening classes, on weekdays for java programming at Windsor. I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this to convey my regards for your new position at Stanford university.

Though, its hard to digest the fact that you are leaving Windsor, I am extremely happy for your new beginnings at the top-notch university. Undoubtedly, you are the best tutor, I have come across so far and you deserve this.

Attending your classes, is the best decision I have ever taken; they are exceptionally informative and engaging. There was a never a gloomy session delivered, I am astonished with your profound knowledge on computer programming languages. You have been great inspiration for me to excel in my career and constantly work on my technical skill-set.

Recently, I have sent an acceptance message in LinkedIn platform; request to acknowledge. I urge you to stay in touch with me on these online networking sites. We can also meet-up in tech-community events held in Stanford every month on first Sundays.

I wish you all the success for your future endeavours. Hope to see you soon.

Regards,
Sai

You have recently moved to another province and need your internet service set up. You chose the company you would like to go with and made an appointment. However, nobody arrived at the scheduled time.
Write an email to the company in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:
• Explain the problem.
• Tell them why you need internet service.
Suggest what the company should do now.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m writing regarding my internet installation, which was supposed to happen this morning, however no workers showed up on the agreed time, and no one from your company has contacted me.

I made an appointment on your website for Monday, August 26, 10:30 am at 24, Castlefield Dr, Hamilton, ON. After I waited for more than one hour I had to leave the house to pick up my daughter from her classes. Unfortunately, I did not receive any calls or messages from installers during that hour or afterwards.

As I work remotely for the international company, I must have 24/7 internet connection to be able to do my job. This situation made me to postpone a very important meeting and my boss did not feel happy about it.

The internet has to be set up tonight or tomorrow morning, the latest. Please contact me as soon as possible, so we can rearrange the time for installation. As the only way to contact your customer support is by email, I expect a quick response from your side. I hope you can understand how important this is to me and my job.

Best Regards,
Anastasiia Kalush.

You recently made reservations for dinner at a very famous and expensive restaurant in town. However, the meal and the service were terrible. The restaurant manager was not available to solve the problem, so you left without a resolution.
State what problems you had with the food you ordered. Complain about the service. Describe how you want the restaurant to resolve the problem to your satisfaction.

Dear Manager,

I am writing this email to express my disappointment about the recent experience I had in your restaurant situated in Downtown, Toronto. I had made a reservation for two on 22nd October at 8 PM on the occasion of my wedding anniversary.

After a recommendation from a friend, me and my wife were really looking forward to trying your signature ‘Pasta’, however we ended up leaving with a bitter taste in our mouths. Firstly, the pasta we received was uncooked and shabbily presented. I was shocked to see that a dish worth $100 was given to us on an unclean plate and did not match the description on your menu.

Moreover, upon complaining about this to the server, we were not met with a positive response. Our server, Mike, was rude for no reason and did not let us voice our concerns. When I asked him to call the manager, he just abruptly walked away saying, “The manager is not available”.

I request you to look into this matter and either provide us with a complimentary meal or kindly refund the sum of $135 in my original mode of payment.

Yours sincerely,
Sid

You were charged for items which you have not purchased at the local grocery shop.
Write a letter to the manager of the grocery shop in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:
Describe the problem that you have faced,
Explain the items you have purchased,
Suggest what the manager should do to resolve it.

Dear Manager,
Hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to express my extreme disappointment while visiting your store yesterday.
Myself Dhruvil Patel, I have visited your store on 23rd October 2023 and I appreciate the variety choices you have in store for all types of grocery, I would say it’s one stop shop, however, I dissatisfied on the last point of purchase. After returning home, I have found out that I was charged for a bag of rice which I have not purchased.
According to purchase, I have bought 1 kg tomatoes, 2 bags of chips and 1 pk of ketchup. But I have charged for 5 items including a bag of rice. Because of that, I have to go back to store again and explain the situation which took almost 2 hours to complete refund process. Additionally, I had to wait in lineup which is another big reason of dissatisfaction.
I request you to get regulated scanner with counter in POS to resolve the issue as, manual entry will continues making error in billing which will spoil the precious time of all customers as well as for staffs.
I would love to visit the store again for my regular purchases and hope the issue will be resolved by that time.
Regards,
Dhruv Ptl

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Dear manager,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing dissatisfactory email for the service being promised to me while renting the car from your company.
Myself Dhruvil Patel, I have rented BMW X3 from your company a month before for 3 months as I was planning to go on tour. BMW X3 is the best car I have found for the comfortable driving for long trip. Even I became fan of the performance it has given while using for first two weeks. All of a sudden, air-conditioning stop working in middle of my trip. Ever since the car has no air-conditioning, however, the cooling fan is working fine. As per the service offered to me while renting car, they have said mechanic will come to the place if car finds any mechanical issues, because of that reason I am trying to call your company to resolve this issue and get it fixed. But nobody is giving proper response.
I would like to request you to send a technician to fix the air-conditioning as it’s hot weather out here. I have already submitted repair application with the detail of the place to your website so it will be easier to locate us and send help.
I am forward for your good response and compensation for the issues I had to face.
Regards,
Dhruvil Patel

After witnessing an accident, the police have asked you to write a report describing
what you saw,
who was involved,
the road conditions, and who you feel was responsible.

Dear Officer,

I’m writing this email to provide the details about the incident that was happened at the intersection of Steels Ave. and McDavid road, since I have witnessed it.

I was driving back from my work and when I approached near the location where the accident occurred, I saw a white pickup truck slamming into the black SUV. The SUV was taking left turn while that truck was going straight.

There were 4 passengers in both of the vehicles, 3 in SUV and 1 in truck. Truck’s driver escaped with minor bruises; however, a person sitting on the other car’s front passenger seat had some severe injuries.

As far as I have noticed, it was the bright sunny day and the road was dry enough for vehicles to make good traction. Therefore, I believe that the driver of the white truck seems to be at fault because he was driving fast and failed to stop when the lights turned red, resulting in collision.

I hope the information I have provided would be helpful to solve the case. If you need to know anything else, I will be very pleased to assist.

Regards,

Satvir

Please evaluate the Writing Task 1:

Dear Jack,

I am writing to let you know I am planning to go to vacation this summer, and to invite you for the vacation.

First of all, It is been ages now, when we all friends have had spent the time together. So now I am planning to go to some hill station this time. How about Manali? Jane and Jose are also very excited for the Manali. Let me know what do you think.

Secondly, We are planning to spend one day at Kullu and other two days in Manali. At this time, Manali will have the pleasant weather so it is the best time to enjoy all the activities available there. I am very eager to enjoy the activities like Trekking, Rafting and so on.

Lastly, I would like you to join us for this vacation. I assure you that this will the best memories that we are going to have on this vacation. Let me know your thoughts, so that I can book the tickets at the earliest to avoid the last minute rush.

I am eagerly waiting for your response.

With warm wishes,
Garry

Task 2
You work in a small office. The boss wants to reduce vacation time by two days but send everyone in the office to a nice beachside hotel for 4 days of job training. Some of the staff are very happy with this idea. Others are upset. The boss asked you to respond to an opinion survey.

Choose the option that you prefer. Why do you prefer your choice? Explain the reasons for your choice. Write about
150-200 words.
* Option A: I think we should keep our vacation time instead of going to the training.
* Option B: I think we should do the training and cut back our vacation time.

Dear Sir/Madam,



Thank you for including me in the opinion survey regarding your proposal to join the job training at the expense of vacation time. Even though I have to shrink my holiday plans, I still think it is a great opportunity that we cannot miss. 



Firstly, let me express my gratitude for your choice of location for this occasion. The beach house itself sets the holiday mood and can relieve the tension for those who might feel a bit stressed with vacation time cut back. I think not only will we enjoy the training, but we will request one more upon completion of this one. 



Secondly, the crash course on the new customer management system is long-awaited and is desperately needed for our small team. As our day-to-day operations are based on accurate and quick data about our clients, I strongly believe that this 4-day learning session will boost our team’s ability and bring results in the coming quarter.



Finally, I would like to suggest to round up our training with a small teambuilding event. I have some ideas on how to organize it and have a small selection of team-building activities that we will all enjoy.



I am looking forward to this chance to improve my skills and will do my best to support you with this initiative. 



Best regards,

Stacy.


Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing this email inquiring about some information that would help us to plan our trip efficiently.

Our company will be organizing a tour for a group which includes students from different regions of the world, and we are considering to take them to the Luxe museum.

Therefore, I would like to know that what exhibits are being presented at the museum. If you could provide me the details about them, whether the Luxe displays the traditional exhibits or the modern ones. Since we would be organizing two separate groups than we could divide our students into different pairs as per their preference.

In addition, please also provide the timings of the openings and the closings for the upcoming week. One another thing, if there is any statutory holiday coming within the next week when the museum will be closed, please do not forget to mention that. Moreover, please let me know about the ticket prices for a group. If some discounted tickets were given to the groups, it would be great.

I look forward to hearing back from you soon.

Regards,
Rajveer

Thank you so much for including me in this survey regarding school uniforms. In my opinion school uniforms are less important during study. It is useless for students, parents, and schools.
Firstly, Students are required to be in a comfortable zone learning at school. They take the challenge of wearing school dress as an extra activity for them. Moreover, students are already stressed from books and assignments; attendance, timing, and lectures. Also, it’s big hectic for school-going parents.
Secondly, as per school rules, students have to wear a uniform before going to school to show equality and punctuality. They spend a lot of time preparing their school dress. Most of the students were absent from school and lost their studies due to dirty school dress. Additionally, learning requires only concentration and study material; teacher support; and group study. As far as my concern. There is no connection between dress and education.
To sum up, schools should remove uniform barriers and highly focus on student studies for learning. It will be helpful to growing our nation.
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City Development Survey
You live in a small town of 10,000 people. A large green area in the centre of town is undeveloped. The city has sent out an opinion survey to see what residents would like to have built in that area.

Option A: Shopping Complex: This shopping mall would include restaurants, a large supermarket, and a movie theatre.

Option B: Recreational Park: This park would include a sports complex, a large green area, and a small petting zoo.

A:Task 2

Dear Sir,

Thank you for including me in the survey regarding the development of the Central Park undeveloped area. I think both options are great, but I would incline a bit more in the direction of the shopping complex.

As I have just moved here with my family from the big city, we still miss some of those traits that the big city has to offer. Our small town has only one big supermarket, which you still have to drive to for quite a bit, and there are just a handful of options for dining out. In the short term, we can live with that, but as we are planning to settle down here, it would be great to have a bit more variety within your reach. Plus, I am a big movie fan, so I cannot say “no” to the cinema.

The second and more important point is what opportunity the shopping complex brings. Having a platform for growing a business is crucial for small towns like ours. It can attract more people to join our community and provide them with a chance to build their lives here without looking outwards. In this respect, the shopping complex is not merely a matter of entertainment but an essential step for the whole town.

Overall, I think the shopping complex will drive progress for our small community and bring joy as well as opportunity for those who are seeking it.

Best regards,
Ethan

Question: you have been having problems with your computer. you took the computer to be repaired, but after being repaired, the computer doesn’t work well.

Ask what happend at the shop
Explain why you are not satisfied with your sevice
describe what you want the manager to do

Dear Shop Manager,

I am writing this letter to bring to your attention that my computer is not repaired properly from your shopkeeper.

I am a regular customer come to your shop. On last week, I brought my computer to your shop to fix volume control and along with graphics image is not visible.

Given this fact, I would like to describe about the incident happened on your shop last evening. Yesterday morning, I received a call from your shop saying that you can take back your computer as it is fixed. I came to your shop to takeback my computer and paid the bill sum of amount $150 for the services. Once I return to home, I was shocked due to volume control issue persist.

Moreover, Graphics image is getting displayed but it’s seeming to be scattered. I need to complete my project presentation by next week.

I would request you to take back my computer from my home and please resolve both issue again and deliver to me within 3 business days.

I hope you will consider my request and translating to prompt actions from your side. Your kind cooperation in this matter will be greatly appreciated.

Regards,
Sree

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i am waiting for score its requested to u check my test.
Regards,
sobia

Task 1
Dear Manager,

I am writing this correspondence to express my profound disappointment regarding the persistent parking issue faced by us at the Square One shopping complex located in Mississauga.

My family and I are frequent visitor at your mall. The grandeur of the complex is throughly enjoyed by everyone in my family. Specifically, the entertainment zone is a go to place for my daughter. But unfortunately, recent unavailability of ample parking space has added to our dismay. Additionally, even if there are few spots available, the security at the gate denies entry. This unsatisfactory behavior of the staff has caught me off guard.

Currently, we have to park our car at a paid parking ground which is located a mile away from the mall entrance. In addition to this, walking all through from the parking to the mall carrying a toddler in my arm makes it distressing.

Given the mall’s esteemed reputation, I would like you to take immediate action to provide additional parking space, specially for frequent visitors like us. I am looking forward for a positive response from your end on this issue.

Sincerely ,
Sweta

Task 2
Employee welfare is the biggest treasure for a company. I express my gratitude for including me in the survey regarding the childcare facility in the office. Although some employees may argue to continue with the restaurant, I firmly believe replacing it with childcare would have significant benefits to the working parents. It will instil trust, confidence and longevity of their tenure at the workplace.

In my viewpoint, this will have a valuable impact on the company’s reputation. Establishing a facility will be an accepted change for mothers who struggle between their personal and professional commitments. Nevertheless, it will be cumbersome to find another pocket friendly food joint nearby, this cannot be weighed with the incremental advantages the company will gain by providing childcare support.

Generally, the parents juggle between finding a good daycare at close proximity of the office and expenses associated with it. If the company provides an in-house child care zone it will be a relief for them which can be channelised on their productivity at the work.

In conclusion, the advantages of a childcare outweigh those of a present restaurant . I eagerly await the final decision of the club and wholeheartedly support to this cause.

Task 1

Dear Store Manager,

I am writing this correspondence to express my profound disappointment regarding the regrettable purchase of tea cups from the Walmart, Square one store.

On December 17, 2023 , I acquired a set of six tea cups which was crafted in China for $110. I was filled with excitement as I intended to present this to my sister, Kelly , to embark her first Christmas in Canada. Given the store’s esteemed reputation, I presumed that all products underwent rigorous quality checks. But unfortunately, upon returning home, I discovered that two of the six cups were defective. Specifically, the handle had cracks, and one cup was completely shattered into pieces. Furthermore, the following day when I approached the sales agent , he denied to refund or exchange the item, despite the item being within the return policy guideline. The staff’s unsatisfactory behavior caught me off guard.

As a measure for keeping up the goodwill, I would request you to deliver the exact item to my billing address. Additionally, I would greatly appreciate a discount voucher for future use. I eagerly await a positive response from your end regarding this matter.

Yours Sincerely,
Jenny

Task 2

Engaging in the act of reading serves as a means of self-education. I express my gratitude for including me in the survey regarding development of the empty space. Although, some members may argue on using it as a conference hall. I firmly believe, Library will bring about numerous long-term benefits to our community. It will instil the habit of reading and foster social gatherings.

From my perspective, a library will be beneficial for all ages group as compared to conference hall catering to a small section. In this digital era, it is crucial to preserve the tradition of reading physical book. This will have a significant impact on the younger generation. Moreover, it can be accessed by non members, providing reachability. The balmy atmosphere of a library filled with books can re-introduce the reading habit to the community.

Additionally, from the revenue generated can be utilised to stock up on books which can be utilised by the reading club. The club will promote positive mental health and act as a means of social gathering within the neighbourhood.

In conclusion, the advantages of a library outweigh those of a conference hall. I eagerly await the final decision of the club and wholeheartedly support to this cause.

Last week you had travelled in a domestic airline due to some business. You did not had a good experience with that airline. The discontentment, due to the poor service, made you complain about the airline.
Write an email to the Airline in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:

Problems faced by regular passengers
Complain about the poor service

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter concerning my recent experience with your airline. On January 17, 2023, I travelled to Vancouver from Toronto on Air Canada EX 100.

Upon entering the plane, there was a foul smell and the aisle was disorganized and unclean. In addition to this, the washroom lacked basic water supply and the tissue papers were missing, which made the entire trip uncomfortable for the passengers onboard. Despite repeatedly complaining to the airhostess about the service, she did not pay much attention to the distress of the passengers.

Furthermore, upon landing at our destination, we were informed that our baggage has been re-routed and would result in delay for about 2 days. After discussing with fellow passenger, we came to the conclusion that the service of Air Canada has detoriated over the years. The unpleasant experience makes us wonder if we should use the service of Air Canada in the future. The overall experience was underwhelming and did not meet the standard of the price we paid for the fare.

I would appreciate if you could positively take the feedback and offer us enchanting journey in the future. I look forward to receiving a response from your end.

Regards,
Tina

Your city is planning to ban public smoking. The city has sent out an opinion survey to see what residents think about it.

Option A: Smoking should be banned in public places.
Option B: Smoking should not be banned in public places.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to express my appreciation for including me in the survey regarding ban of smoking in public places. From my perspective, smokers must not be allowed to use cigarettes in public places.

Firstly, it is widely acknowledged that smoking poses a significant threat to one’s health. If the city council permit the usage of cigarette outside of the personal space of an individual , it will send an unimpressive message to the society about promoting unhealthy habits. This is particularly concerning for the young-aged people who may be lured and indulge itself in the prohibited practice.

Secondly, non-smokers would indirectly be inhaling the poisonous smoke, especially in enclosed space such as restaurant, shopping complexes. Moreover, the smoke from the cigarette contains high level of toxicity which would increase the air pollution within the city.

In conclusion, implementing a ban on smoking in public areas would bestow considerable advantages. I anxiously await the final decision of the city council and wholeheartedly endorse this cause.

You have been having problems with your computer. You took the computer to be repaired, but after being repaired, the computer doesn’t work well.
Write an email to the manager of the computer shop in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things: Ask what happened at the shop. Explain why you are not satisfied with the service. Describe what you want the manager to do.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter concerning the persistent issue with my computer. On January 10,2023, I had repaired my computer, HP 200C from your shop located at Erin Mills Town Center, Mississauga.

According to the technician, the battery life had expired and required a replacement which was duly done at your shop. However, the battery is dead again after just one week, due to which I am unable to operate the computer. This is particularly concerning as I have an upcoming project deadline that must be met; failing to do so would result in poor grade at my university.

I am extremely dissatisfied with the service provided, as I believe the root cause of the issue was not properly diagnosed and repaired. I request you to look into the matter urgently and send a technician to my home address to resolve the issue. Additionally, provide a temporary computer to compensate for loss of time suffered by me due to inadequate resolution.

Looking for a prompt response and an effective remedy from your end.

Regards,
Priyanka

Please provide feedback

Your local community is putting on an art show and is a little unsure about displaying some of the submissions. In an effort to resolve their internal dispute, they have decided to survey the community. They’ve asked you to identify and explain your preference for two options:

Option A: Censor the artwork

Option B: Do not censor the artwork

I express my gratitude for including me in the survey regarding the act of censoring the artwork in the upcoming event at our community center in Mississauga. In my viewpoint, artwork displays imagination of the artist and should not be subject to censorship.

To commence with, art is a form of showcasing ideas and creativity by an artist whose only asset is their craft. I so believe, censoring their craft would limit the opportunities for the creator to display their talent in the show. Nevertheless, we can segregate the event into categories to make it more family-friendly.

In addition to this, if we discriminate based on the factor which qualify for censorship, it could have a detrimental effect on the event. We can end up having limited artists to perform or display their skill. Furthermore, it could send an unimpressive message to the community about the orthodox view of the committee responsible for making this decision.

To conclude, showcasing the different form of skill would bestow positive outcome. I eagerly await the final decision of the community and whole heartedly endorse the result.

Dear company survey team,
Thank you for taking the time to consider our opinion about this matter. In my view, we should have paternity leave, and my reasons are described below.
Firstly, having a newborn is an adjustment for everyone in the family, not only for the mother as we commonly thought. Although grandparents might take the lead in some chores at home, the father also needs to get used to the new routine. Secondly, it is extremely important that the father is off from work in the first weeks after the birth date, so not only can he help the mother who recovers from labor, but also be in charge of some tasks. For example, go grocery shopping, clean the house, and look after other kids or pets.
Once again, I firmly believe paternity leave will be a huge achievement for the employees, and I appreciate you asking for our view on this matter. I am sure the company will make the best decision for its employees.

Sincerely,
Ana Silva

Your company is struggling with employee retention and is considering implementing either paternity leave or a shorter work day to increase the loyalty of its highly-skilled workforce. It has sent you a survey asking you to identify and explain your preference for:

Option A – paternity leave

Option B – shorter workdays

Thank you for including me in the survey for Paternity leave policy. In my opinion, paternity leave would have a potential in winning employee’s loyalty as compared to shorter workdays.

Firstly, In the initial phase of parenthood, both partners are emotionally and physically drowned with the new phase of life. New parent, have thousand of problem and challenges to deal it. The introduction of paternity leave, would leave an impressive impact on the father and his family about the company. Moreover, this would help him lower his anxiety from juggling with the personal and professional commitment.

Secondly, this policy would be a revolutionary change on the mindset of employees within the company. Generally, workers are anguished, for the non-availability of special leave under these circumstances. In addition to this, the feeling not been able to contribute to his new born would have drastic impact on the performance at work. The polciy would be a breakthrough for showing affection to the other gender. Furthermore, it would have overwhelming response from the employees on their loyalty with the company, thereby, reducing the attrition rate.

To conclude, introduction of paternity leave would have a increasingly positive impact on the company’s future objective.

The new cheque book you ordered from your bank hasn’t arrived. It’s three weeks late! Write an email to your bank manager. In your email, complain about the bad service, explain how you paid, and ask what he can do.

Dear Mr Goyal,

I am writting this email to express my concern about the service provided by CIBC bank – located at Erin town Center. A month back, i had placed an order for a cheque book for my chequing account #0045. Eventhough,the representative assured it would be delivered within 15 days from the order received by the bank but i have not received any update as of today.

This showcase a very unprofessional behvaiour from a reputed bank branch . It is hampering my business since i have lot of payments to make to this month. It’s the first time, in my last 10 years holding the account, I have experienced such a service at your center.

I would request you to expedite my order (No 45893) and resolve the issue as soon as possible. If posting the cheque book takes additional days , I am fine to collect from the branch once available.

Thank you for your understanding.Looking for a response from your end.

Regards,
Priyanka

TASK 2

In the past few years, there has been an exponential increase in population due to Canada incentivizing the promise of a better life to immigrants. While some believe that the current system provides enough support, I firmly believe that some necessary programs could be added to benefit immigrants.

In the grand scheme of things, people all around the world are deciding to become Canadian citizens benefiting the economic growth of the country. However, some people end up going back to their countries because they did not receive enough support from the government. Starting a new life in an unknown country is very scary and challenging; therefore, some specific strategies should be implemented to make this transition as smooth as possible. For instance, opening an online forum, where newcomers can share their experiences, support each other, and learn from past mistakes. In addition, helping immigrants find a job accordingly to their skill sets, would target a strong sense of belonging. Finally, creating ceremonies or events where people can socialize and interact, would ensure the well-being of the new citizens.

All things considered, adding new strategies to help the immigrants in this challenging transition holds immense potential not only for the betterment of the immigrants but also, to ensure keep providing economic growth by settling permanently in the country

Hi Angela, can you please rate my writing? thanks

Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope you are doing well. I would like to introduce myself as a class teacher of 8th Grade Science subject in “Root Millennium School”. My students love to read your scientific books because not only your way of writing is concise, but it is easy to understand as well.
On next Thursday, there is a Book fair being organized by my students in school premises in which your piece of writings shall surely be in limelight. Besides, I am planning to invite you as a chief guest in this event so that my students would not only get a chance to meet their favorite writer but also will try to learn some useful insights on importance of effective writing.
Moreover, I would request you to give speech and throw some light on their most interesting topic i.e. “The speed of light” following with an engaging session like “Science Quiz” in which they will participate with keen interest and the winners will get exciting prices.
I am hopeful that you will accept my invitation.

Yours sincerely,
Joe Will

Can you please rate my writing:
Task 1:
Dear Manager,
I am writing to express my disappointment during my recently experience at ABC Restaurant on 4th May 2023. We was told to wait for 1 hour without any explanations even though we made a reservation at 7 and arrived on time. Finally, we had our table and ordered the food. The food came an hour hour later, and it was cold and dry. We had 3 servers who changed shifts during our dinner. None of them really served us as we were told to wait the whole time. One of the servers took back our food and did not serve us a new plate. Furthermore, they also got our drinks order wrong and did nothing to rectify. Finally, after 3 hours at the table without food and drinks, we had to leave empty stomach.

I have been to your restaurant before, and it was a great experience that was why I came back. But yesterday was truly disappointing. I hope you can look into improving the service, and provide enough trainings to the servers to better serve customer.

Thank you for reading my email.

Unhappy customer,
Namie

Task 2
A recreational park would be a better option because it provides a space for people of all ages to gather. A sports complex could provide children and adults bonding activities, at the same time encouraging active lifestyle. Studies have shown that large green space will increase happiness of the people living around it and provide many advantages for people who use the space. A small petting zoo has the potential for a fun outing for all ages, and educational opportunities for children. As we live in an increasing urban environment, most people will appreciate the experience they could have with animals. Studies also have shown that animals will decrease our stress level.

While a shopping complex could be great boast to the economy, provide many employment, and attract people moving into the city, it could also create competitions for many of the locally-owned cafes and retails we currently have in out city. The city also have a large shopping complex, even though it is further away, it has served the city well for many years. Overall, a recreational park would serve the city residents better than a new shopping complex.

Please evaluate below task 2 for celpip.

I like to opine in favor of option A, printing more local and worldwide news would much prominent to readers rather than offering huge discounts, I will share my viewpoint in this survey.

Firstly, nowadays news is an essential part of our life which gives us better knowledge of what sort of things are happening around us. In our city your newspaper has marvelous testimonials, people have been believed only your paper has accurate news from top to bottom around us and internationally. I strongly recommend you to introduce a weekend special edition more news about debates which occurring on climate change this will help people to educate how the scientist is keeping their efforts on their commitments.

On the other hand, having more discounts for subscribing to newspapers doesn’t make any sense without having proper content or matter on news. Offers can increase your revenue but not faith in your newspaper.

To sum up, I have stated above my viewpoint to print a lot of news instead of focusing on discounts. By reading the news people can gain better general knowledge and how to move in this era. I appreciate the chance to provide to me to voice my opinion.