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  1. Nowadays people are spending more time away from home, because they spend longer time in their workplace. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages?

    In this day and age, there have been notable changes in individuals’ daily routines. A sizable proportion of people hold a firm belief that the amount of time at home declined due to the lengthy hours at the place of work. This essay is intended to elaborate on the benefits and drawbacks of this issue.

    There are innumerable positive effects of working overtime. In the first place, investing more hours in working accelerates an individual’s professional growth. Due to competitiveness and difficulties, working overtime becomes the only option for workers to reach their targets. It could be further explained by the fact that extra hours create an opportunity for employees to either get a promotion or earn a higher salary. Another advantage worth mentioning is that companies are capable of making higher profits. This is thanks to more projects delivered on time with the support of hard-working employees. It is understandable that on the occasion of producing higher quantities, organizations may easily improve the bottom line. To illustrate this, a recent study from a Vietnamese newspaper in 2019 over the past two years cited that 90% of businesses had doubled their profits.

    By stark contrast, spending too much time working brings various detrimental consequences. One of the primary problems is employees’ overall well-being. As a matter of fact, but for additional working hours, individuals are able to enjoy healthier lifestyles. This is the main reason for not only numerous illnesses such as heart disease and hypertension but also obesity. Additionally, workers’ families are negatively impacted in many cases. In other words, the family relationship suffers the most owing to a lack of interactions between them and their spouses or children. Since they are put under high pressure from the work environment, a plethora of conflicts may be caused. According to a survey polling over one thousand students, 90% of them think that their parents do not have at least 15 minutes to daily communicate with others.

    In conclusion, for all irrefutable above-mentioned merits, although it is widely believed that working overtime is beneficial for individuals as well as businesses, others would argue that downsides to physical health and family relationship should be considered.

    1. Excellent essay! You’d score 7. For a higher score, strengthen your introduction and conclusion by mentioning your main advantage and disadvantage.

  2. Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
    Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

    In recent years, the popularity of online shopping has rapidly increased over offline one. This essay will highlight both the benefits and drawbacks that result from such changes.

    To begin with the positives, a crucial advantage is that buying on the internet can significantly save buyer’s time and budget. This is because when shopping offline, customers have to spend extra money and time to get to the store they need. For instance, if clients get to the shop by car, they will pay petrol and parking fees, and, what’s more, they will lose some time for the road. In contrast, the only thing you need to buy somewhat on the internet is to visit the shop’s website and order delivery. Not only this, but the shop could also reduce expenses on space rental and staff salaries with the transition to online trading.

    However, web purchases do present some problems. One of them is that when we order goods online, we are unable to check them properly. To illustrate, talking about clothes, most of the web boutiques in Russia do not allow buyers to try it on when buying through post or delivery. Taking into account that clothes are maximally private and personal belongings, as a result, it is much harder for the purchaser to choose clothing that would look best on him.

    To sum it up, despite the disadvantage of the impossibility of checking goods before purchasing, I believe that money and time saving is a positive which outweighs any and all negatives.

    1. Nice essay Pavel. You would score 7, but be careful with your conditional. In paragraph one, you’re using the conditional to state a routine likelihood, so ideally, you should use the zero conditional (present + present)

  3. Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students.
    Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

    There is no doubt that the computer has become an important part of the life of a modern person. However, whereas some people believe the widespread distribution of computers in schools and universities can be harmful to students, I would agree that using electronic devices for teaching needs is vital and positive for the whole education system.

    On the one hand, those who believe introducing computers into classrooms is negative might argue that looking too much time on the screen may be dangerous for students’ eyes thus creating various problems connected with blindness or visual acuity. This is because long interaction with RGB diodes which the usual computer screen consists of can cause eyes’ surface dryness. Not only this, but a sedentary lifestyle calls obesity-connected problems. To illustrate, the recent study conducted in Ukraine has shown that the number of people suffering from excess fat illnesses has increased by 20 percent during the last 10 years. This is especially dangerous for young people, such as students and pupils, because as they become older, their illnesses may be worsened.

    Nevertheless, I believe that the digitalization of the education sphere might be extremely helpful for students and humanity at all. The reason for this is that the use of electronic devices can rapidly increase pupils’ productivity. For instance, such a well-known website as Wikipedia can help them to save a huge amount of time for information search thereby allowing them to do greater work for the same time.

    In conclusion, although the implementation of computers in the studying process increases the risk of some diseases in students, I think their use is a necessary part of technical progress which is essential for the further development of humanity.

  4. Young people in the modern world seem to have more power and influence than any previous young generation. Why is this the case? What impact does this have on the relationship between old and young people?

    In recent times, modern young people have started acquiring more and more strength over their peers from the past. This essay will explore one of the possible factors behind these changes and then explain how they can influence the relationships between old and new generations.

    Of all the various components that lead to the nowadays young people’s strengthening, one is that their mentality and, what’s more, their way of thinking is completely different compared to their ancestors. This is because the widespread implementation of computers and other electronic devices in our everyday lives has saved a lot of time for people for some machine and useless work and information search, thus leading to the significant progress in humanity’s development. The young generation is more intellectually developed because it is much easier for them to find the various data sources for studying or broadening their horizons. For example, such well-known websites as Google or Yahoo helps us find the info we need instantly. In contrast, before the computer’s distribution, we had to search for that in books and magazines, which was rather uncomfortable and took a lot of time.

    This current young generation’s domination, which I wrote about earlier, might lead to conflicts with older persons and their further offense on them. However, my personal opinion is that these conflicts won’t be significant and harmful for connections or relationships because the progress is unavoidable and will only intensify over time. Consequently, each subsequent generation of young will be smarter and more erudite comparing to the previous one.

    In conclusion, the availability of information is one of the main reasons why the present young generation is more powerful than any other before. Nevertheless, it has tiny impact on the relationships between aged and young people.

  5. The typical teaching situation of a teacher and students in the class will not exist by the year 2050. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

    There is no doubt that education plays an important role in the life of a modern person. However, whereas some people think the existing educational system is effective enough and will leave the same in the future, I believe it will be entirely transformed by 2050.

    One of the most significant benefits of the current way of studying is that the live communication between pupils helps them make new friends and strengthen their connections, which is extremely important at their age. This is influential because the school is a place where children and teenagers not only attend classes and gain knowledge but also learn how to behave in society and connect with other people. As a result, they can make reliable friends and keep in touch even after graduation. To illustrate, most of the friends of mine are my former classmates. Although we finished school a long time ago, we still spend a lot of time together.

    Nevertheless, the widespread implementation of computers and other electronic devices into the educational process, which is, in my opinion, one of the most significant changes in the future, is unavoidable and, what’s more, beneficial for students and society. With the educational’s sphere’s digitalization, they will be able to study without leaving home. Thus, it will save lots of time for them on the road to school and make the atmosphere of studying more comfortable, friendly, and effective. Consequently, there will be more high-qualified specialists in the country.

    In conclusion, although the current teaching system offers more possibilities for pupils’ socialization, I agree that it will disappear in the foreseeable future.

  6. Question:
    In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough.
    What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
    Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

    Passage:

    There is no doubt that parents want their children to become successful. Children therefore are often told that they can achieve anything if they work hard. While there are some benefits to consider, there are also some drawbacks which we should not overlook. In this passage, I will present both sides of the argument.

    The advantage is that children is motivated to work hard as they think that they will become successful once they put in effort. To illustrate, when one children want to excel in examinations and get into university, he will work extremely hard to study so as to achieve their goals. If children are told that they cannot achieve anything when they work hard, children will become lazy and they will not try their best to study.

    Turning to the other side of the argument, there are repercussions when children are told that they can achieve what they want if they work hard. If children work hard and they cannot achieve what they want, they will lose motivation to work and their self-esteem will be negatively affected. They will regard themselves as useless people. They may think that no matter how hard they work, they achieve nothing. As a consequences, they will not work hard anymore and they will give up. In addition, children suffer from huge pressure when they get nothing, there will be under immense pressure pushing them to work harder to achieve their goals. This is bad for the growth of children.

    In conclusion, the pros is that children can be motivated while on the other hand, children lose motivation and they can under extreme pressure.

  7. Question:
    Some people think that governments should hold responsibility for not creating equal job opportunities for men and women, while others think that society is at fault. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
    Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

    Passage:
    There is no doubt that job opportunities for men and women are not equal. While some people think that government should bear the responsibility on this, others argue that society is at fault. I firmly agree with the latter argument, and in this essay I will discuss both sides of the argument.

    First and foremost, the side that advocate governments should shoulder responsibility for not creating equal job opportunities for men and women think that government as the promoter should educate the public to create equal job opportunities. For instance, the government can launch campaigns and advertisement to educate the public that men and women are equal. Women can also work on a variety of jobs. If the government do not educate the public, the phenomenon of job inequality between men and women continues to exist.

    However, in my point of view, I think that society should bear the responsibility because some people in society think that men should be the breadwinner while women should do housework at home. To illustrate, my dad work outside but my mum is a housewife. My dad always says that my mum should stays at home. It is the responsibility for society to change their views on women and to embrace women in working environment. If society do not change their norms towards women, equal job opportunities for men and women is insurmountable.

    Having looked at both sides, I wholeheartedly believe that society should hold responsibility for not creating equal job opportunities for men and women.

  8. Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

    Some people believe that recycling process of wastage collection from homes are not enough. They admit that government should establish a legal structure, which is the only way to increase recycling. In my opinion, I also believe that there ought to have a legal requirement, as well as should use other criteria to improve recycling.

    Obviously, when there is a legal frame for recycling process for people, which is able to make adequate restrictions to reduce environmental pollution. So, people try to adapt for the particular legal system. For example, government can impose a tax for people, who do not involve in recycling process, hence citizens tend to continue or begin the desired recycling process. It is a good way to save nature.

    Specifically, the legal system is confined the unnecessary withdrawal to the environment, which has been conducting so far, thus people will start to behave according to the law. For instance, if government execute punishments to citizens, who do not obey the legal system of recycling, consequently, people will conduct the desired goal, as they will not breach the laws. It is cleared that legal system can control the people by keeping recycling process as their responsibility.

    Additionally, motivation to commence the recycling projects through companies, business enterprises is also important, due to a large number of waste are produced by them. Through the production process has been creating a wastage, hence enterprises should conduct the recycling. As well as, authorities should focus on alternative productions from wastage.

    In conclusion, it is insisted that above mentioned points prove that legal requirement should have established, however motivations and alternative productions from wastage must be focused to improve the recycling.

  9. Some people believe that recycling process of wastage collection from homes are not enough. They admit that government should establish a legal structure, which is the only way to increase recycling. In my opinion, I also believe that there ought to have a legal requirement, as well as should use other criteria to improve recycling.

    Obviously, when there is a legal frame for recycling process for people, which is able to make adequate restrictions to reduce environmental pollution. So, people try to adapt for the particular legal system. For example, government can impose a tax for people, who do not involve in recycling process, hence citizens tend to continue or begin the desired recycling process. It is a good way to save nature.

    Specifically, the legal system is confined the unnecessary withdrawal to the environment, which has been conducting so far, thus people will start to behave according to the law. For instance, if government execute punishments to citizens, who do not obey the legal system of recycling, consequently, people will conduct the desired goal, as they will not breach the laws. It is cleared that legal system can control the people by keeping recycling process as their responsibility.

    Additionally, motivation to commence the recycling projects through companies, business enterprises is also important, due to a large number of waste are produced by them. Through the production process has been creating a wastage, hence enterprises should conduct the recycling. As well as, authorities should focus on alternative productions from wastage.

    In conclusion, it is insisted that above mentioned points prove that legal requirement should have established, however motivations and alternative productions from wastage must be focused to improve the recycling.

  10. Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

    There is no doubt that the environment has a significant influence on the human’s emotional state and mentality. However, whereas some people think that it can be improved only by huge firms and administrations, I would agree with those who argue that improving the citizens’ living conditions is only of their responsibility.

    On the one hand, those who believe that individuals are unable to change their surroundings might argue that they don’t have enough funding and, what’s more, self-organisation for doing it. This is because creating a brand-new infrastructure or taking care of the existing one requires a huge amount of money, which usual people are often unwilling to collect. Even despite they understand that it is of critical importance for their settlement to have good ecology and an external look, they associate these renovations with the local governments, to which they pay taxes.

    Nevertheless, I am sure that locals should take part in the life of their homeplaces. The reason for this is that all the big transformations, as a rule, start with the smaller ones. Talking about the cities’ environment, people could start its renovation by improving their yards. To illustrate, when I was a kid, the government decided to renew the yard where I lived. However, the process then went too long, so that my neighbours decided to do everything themselves. To tackle this issue, they collected some money from the whole neighbourhood, then bought the materials and hired some builders. As a result, our yard looks much better than any other in our town now.

    In conclusion, although the improvement of the environment requires some financing and self-organization, I wholeheartedly believe that even individuals can do this by their own efforts.

  11. At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation out weight the disadvantages?

    Number of youth people are high in contrast to older people in the population of some countries presently. It includes both pros and cons for country. In my opinion, I believe that both younger and senior citizens are important, as well as must be included equally in the population.

    Obviously, younger people are contributed more for country in all aspects, due to their high capabilities. Older people have abilities too, even though young people have more capabilities such as, creative,decision-making,intuitively work, insightful and prudent than seniors. For example, younger people have been updating with digital world, consequently easy to deal current matters and make decisions. Moreover, there are vast opportunities for young boys and girls and also, younger people are strong,fast, willing to take risk for success, thus this exactly lead to an improvement in the work force of country.

    On the other hand, contribution of younger are beneficial, nevertheless senior citizens have been doing a lot for country. Specially, with seniors’ experience and knowledge are essential, in order to attain the goals of country. There can be some disputable situations, however those arising problems could have acknowledged solutions with their broadness. For instance, experienced adult can assume problems, which will occur in the future with their history. So, senior citizens also can contribute to the nation rather than ignoring them or make them as unwanted people.

    In conclusion, while younger generation create enormous development, senior people are also essential to develop nation. If country has both contribution equally, the nation can achieve their goal vastly.

  12. In the future all cars,buses and trucks will be driverless.The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweight the disadvantages.

    Driverless vehicles will be seen in the future, which will only include passengers as people. In my opinion, I think using the self-driving vehicles have advantages, as well as disadvantages.

    Of course, development of technology has been contributing advanced technological strategies, inventions to the world. Transportation has been a critical matter for every country, even though these inventions make it easier to handle. Consequently, driverless vehicles will be a beneficial solution, specifically these vehicles will drive according to transportation guidelines. For instance, autonomous vehicles which will not be required drivers to control, navigate the vehicles, thus it will be programmed to the relevant guidelines, which will not breach the regulations. Furthermore, these vehicles will contain sensors, software which certify safety, while it will reduce wastage of time and money and produce fast service.

    On the other hand, self-driving vehicles will emerge a matter of unemployment, due to lack of job opportunities in the related field. Transportation should modernize with the technology, because it is immensely helped for a system, although it will be a result to the job scarcity intensely. For example, there are experienced drivers, but lack of demand for transportation jobs, owing to the autonomous vehicles. So, it will be the huge arising problem in the future, because of these vehicles. Therefore, usage of self-driving vehicles will influence negatively.

    In conclusion, these above points insist that using driverless vehicles have both advantages and disadvantages. However, the technological intelligence should encourage more and, also propose concede solutions for unemployment will assure beneficial transportation undisputedly

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