How to Write an IELTS Bar Chart Response in Academic Writing Task 1

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How to Write About an IELTS Bar Chart in Academic Writing Task 1

When you prepare your response to an IELTS Bar Chart, your focus should be on speaking well, expressing yourself efficiently, and ticking the examiners boxes.

Your examiner will be looking at your organization, vocabulary, phrasing, sentence variety, grammar, and tenses.

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Read and Understand the Question

To understand How to Write About an IELTS Bar Chart in Academic Writing Task 1, the first thing you need to do is read and internalize the question. The question provides you with a graph and asks you to prepare a short academic presentation.

A typical bar chart question looks like this:

These charts show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries.

Describe and explain the information you see depicted in the graph.

What conclusions can you draw?

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How Long Should my Response Be?

As part of familiarizing yourself with How to Write About an IELTS Bar Chart in Academic Writing Task 1,  you need to know how long your response should be and how much time you have to write about it. You have about 20 minutes to write your response, and it should be about 150 words.

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How to Start a Bar Chart Response

When preparing for IELTS Academic Writing Task 1, it is important that you understand how to formulate your introduction. Your introduction should paraphrase the question so that the examiner knows immediately what you are writing about. 

Your introduction might look like this:

The charts illustrate men’s and women’s employment rates for Canada, South Korea, and Sweden during 2005 and 2015. Employment percentages are shown on the vertical axis, and countries are shown on the horizontal axis.

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How to Prepare your Overview

When you prepare your overview, the goal is to provide the examiner with a high-level view of the graph. Imagine that the graph is on the other side of the room – so no details are visible. NONE!

Your overview might look like this:

Overall, the proportion of working people increased during the period, with employed women showing the most significant rise.

 

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How to Write about Trend 1

With this Bar Chart, it makes sense to write about men as the first trend and women as the second trend.

Start the paragraph by identifying the trend and then add details that support your statement.

Your paragraph about your first trend might look like this:

In all three countries the number of employed men exceeded that of women with Sweden having the highest rate of male employment – approximately 80% in 2005, followed by South Korea with 70% and Canada with 60%. By 2015, Canada had seen the greatest rise to 70%, Sweden had revealed an equal and concurrent drop, and South Korea’s employed men had risen by a mere 5%.

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How to Write about Trend 2

With your introduction, overview, and first trend complete, the next thing you need to do is write about your second trend – men. 

Start the paragraph by identifying the trend and then add details that support your statement.

Your paragraph about your second trend might look like this:

The proportion of employed women was lower than men in all of the countries during both years. It was below 50% everywhere in 2005, but the figures had risen by 2015. By then, over half of Canadian and Swedish women were working. South Korea’s numbers were significantly lower, rising from 30% in 2005 to 35% in 2015

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How to Draw Concluding Remarks

Your concluding remark may be very much like your overview – just make sure you use different words!

Your concluding remark might look like this:

In conclusion, we can see that while all three countries witnessed an increase in employed women, South Korea was the only country where over twice as many men as women were employed during both years.

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